Angry words

nan0bug

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I want to get to know you, love
To find out what's behind your eyes
I want to share my life with you
I'm soooo not like those other guys

I want to see you smile, my dear
To view the grin spread 'cross your face
To give you hope and love and faith
and keep you with a false embrace

I want to see you jump, my toy
Whenever I tell you how high
I want to watch your smile abscond
when you find everythings a lie

I want to watch you burn, you bitch
To feel the feelings I have felt
and know the things I held inside;
To play the hand that I was dealt

I want to see you die, you wise and beautiful woman
To smell the rot rise from inside
To know you'll never love again
To leave you wounded, bound and tied
 

Orsorum

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Dec 26, 2001
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I miss you sometimes,
When autumn turns dark
And winter returns
I want you here

Next to me.

But you're not
A state away
A new life, and
New relationships

We've grown,
made our choices
I've lived and learned
And gotten over you

Live with your choices,
Because you sure
As hell made me live
With mine

Being free from you
Is the best thing
That's ever happened
To me.
 

nan0bug

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Apr 22, 2003
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yes, i wrote it. its about my ex, and the way i felt after we broke up. Wanting to hurt someone, anyone, just so I wouldn't be alone in my misery.
 

KGB1

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Weird usage of poetry rhyming scheme.. :confused:

Man, I know how detremetal it can be to be affixated with animals, but don't let it get to you that much. Cheer up man :):p
 

idNut

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Originally posted by: nan0bug
yes, i wrote it. its about my ex, and the way i felt after we broke up. Wanting to hurt someone, anyone, just so I wouldn't be alone in my misery.

I wrote this poem on speculation of many relationships:

Lovers

The past finally set him free,
A long-awaited future to see.
That past love, a calling to overlook,
A lover's future he wickedly took.
Her hopes and desires, he negated,
Old flesh and love, ever so dated.
Tears and sadness after they had kissed,
Forgotten once again, yet another mistress.
 

krunchykrome

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Dec 28, 2003
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Straight off the black gold, nuts in my hand, trustin no man
Got my glock cocked, runnin this thing, ya understand
We be steamin, blazin, nines pumped in caves and
Hollygrove 17th, the hood where I was raised in
N!ggaz bustin heads and, runnin duckin Feds and
rocks under they tongues and, ki's under they beds and
do it for the real n!ggaz, twenty-four seven hustlers
EHHH, until we shove a barrel down ya pipe suckers.
 

idNut

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Jun 9, 2002
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Originally posted by: krunchykrome
Straight off the black gold, nuts in my hand, trustin no man
Got my glock cocked, runnin this thing, ya understand
We be steamin, blazin, nines pumped in caves and
Hollygrove 17th, the hood where I was raised in
N!ggaz bustin heads and, runnin duckin Feds and
rocks under they tongues and, ki's under they beds and
do it for the real n!ggaz, twenty-four seven hustlers
EHHH, until we shove a barrel down ya pipe suckers.

LMFAO
 

blakeatwork

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Jul 18, 2001
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So, you write a "poem" about how you want to dominate someone, and say it's based off a split up you had???


Christ, sounds like more "Oh, I'm a tortured soul, that's lives for millenia, and can't find rest, and now I'm in an 'angst'-ridden teenagers body... Oh, woe is meeeeee...."

HS kids make me laugh nowadays...

 

blakeatwork

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Jul 18, 2001
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Originally posted by: nan0bug
I havent been in high school for 8 years, sucka.

Bet the Truant Officer must be sick of knocking on your door looking for you everyday...

Umm.. sucka...
rolleye.gif
 

Pepsi90919

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Originally posted by: blakeatwork
Originally posted by: nan0bug
I havent been in high school for 8 years, sucka.

Bet the Truant Officer must be sick of knocking on your door looking for you everyday...

Umm.. sucka...
rolleye.gif

give it up, you're not being funny