AFTER A HIATUS - POEMS BY CHEETARA!!

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Cheetara

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You all have been PM'ing me for more of my original work, so if you wanted to read more or you just love poetry, here is some for you to read. Come in and share your thoughts and maybe even your poetry!



It's funny how sometimes I see your face
And I know it's true
There's no me, without you.

The sun rises, the moon sets, and still you remain.
Unchanged.
The world, gravity, wind and rain, you stay essentially,
the same.

Mine.

Forever.

A love, untouched and unchanged.

UPDATE!! POEM 2

Time and Me

Ding dong the Witch is dead and the Wolf stands outside, huffing and puffing trying to blow down your
Door.

Hanzel and grettel put the old lady in the oven, stuffing her in.
Stuffing like the turkey on thanksgiving.
Like in the teddy bear on your bed.

Stuffing. It's related to all things reassuring about childhood and nurture.

Funny how I like stuffing more now I am older.
 
nakedfrog

nakedfrog

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Oh freddled gruntbuggly
Thy micturations are to me
As plurdled gabbleblotchits on a lurgid bee.
Groop I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me with crinkly bindlewurdles,
Or I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon,
See if I don't!
 
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Cheetara

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Originally posted by: nakedfrog
Oh freddled gruntbuggly
Thy micturations are to me
As plurdled gabbleblotchits on a lurgid bee.
Groop I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me with crinkly bindlewurdles,
Or I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon,
See if I don't!
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that's really good! it has a childlike feel to it!! I like it. Do you write a lot?
 
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monk3y

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remote control
stop, rewind, forward, erase, change the channel! How covenient...

Stop craving, you will never get it... endless mindless temptations in life....
Stop expecting, it would never happen
Stop yelling, no one is listening... it would be over soon
Stop regretting, you cannot undo it
Stop dying... you have just one life
Stop living... you have done it all your life
Stop singing... sounds morbid
Stop missing me... i do not miss you
Stop Crying ... I am not looking at you.
Stop Loving... It is not worth it.
Stop the moment... no.... erase the moment..... no just rewind it ... and play.... and rewind it again and never let it happen...... play and replay just till the moment before this.
 
nakedfrog

nakedfrog

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Apr 3, 2001
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Originally posted by: Cheetara
Originally posted by: nakedfrog
Oh freddled gruntbuggly
Thy micturations are to me
As plurdled gabbleblotchits on a lurgid bee.
Groop I implore thee, my foonting turlingdromes
And hooptiously drangle me with crinkly bindlewurdles,
Or I will rend thee in the gobberwarts with my blurglecruncheon,
See if I don't!
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that's really good! it has a childlike feel to it!! I like it. Do you write a lot?
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Sadly, I cannot take credit for that one. It's Douglas Adams by way of Vogon Prostetnic Jeltz. The third worst poetry in the known galaxy.
 
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yoda291

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Originally posted by: Cheetara
Originally posted by: yoda291
no comment.
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why? what were you feeling when you read it?
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I was going to just comment this would probably not be the best place for this thread, but then I decided against it.
 
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Cheetara

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Originally posted by: InstincT
remote control
stop, rewind, forward, erase, change the channel! How covenient...

Stop craving, you will never get it... endless mindless temptations in life....
Stop expecting, it would never happen
Stop yelling, no one is listening... it would be over soon
Stop regretting, you cannot undo it
Stop dying... you have just one life
Stop living... you have done it all your life
Stop singing... sounds morbid
Stop missing me... i do not miss you
Stop Crying ... I am not looking at you.
Stop Loving... It is not worth it.
Stop the moment... no.... erase the moment..... no just rewind it ... and play.... and rewind it again and never let it happen...... play and replay just till the moment before this.
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This is really good. I really really like it. Its just so original and expressive.
 
Aharami

Aharami

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Aug 31, 2001
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Originally posted by: Cheetara
You all have been PM'ing me for more of my original work, so if you wanted to read more or you just love poetry, here is some for you to read. Come in and share your thoughts and maybe even your poetry!



It's funny how sometimes I see your face
And I know it's true
There's no me, without you.

The sun rises, the moon sets, and still you remain.
Unchanged.
The world, gravity, wind and rain, you stay essentially,
the same.

Mine.

Forever.

A love, untouched and unchanged.
Click to expand...

:thumbsup:
 
JulesMaximus

JulesMaximus

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I've never pm'd you for poetry...or anyone for that matter...nor will I ever after reading that.
 
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Cheetara

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This is one of my meaningful poems that may have just the slightest edge of humor to it. I hope you like it as much as I do.

Time and Me

Ding dong the Witch is dead and the Wolf stands outside, huffing and puffing trying to blow down your
Door.

Hanzel and grettel put the old lady in the oven, stuffing her in.
Stuffing like the turkey on thanksgiving.
Like in the teddy bear on your bed.

Stuffing. It's related to all things reassuring about childhood and nurture.

Funny how I like stuffing more now I am older.
 
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walla

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Jun 2, 2001
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I'd like to quote one of the greatest poets of our time, Mr. Cent.

"Yeah **edit** (yeah **edit**)
You know it's me when I'm cruisin' through your **edit** hood
And **edit** **edit**, Don't try to act like you don't know it me
And **edit**, You know what I'm sayin'?
I didn't put no tints on the **edit**
So you could see me **edit**
If I'm gonna spend $125,000 on some wheels
I want you to get a good look **edit** (haha uh)
Yeah, look at me, look at the license plate
The license plate say: "Get one **edit**" (haha)
Can you get one **edit**?"
 
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Cheetara

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Originally posted by: walla
I'd like to quote one of the greatest poets of our time, Mr. Cent.

"Yeah **edit** (yeah **edit**)
You know it's me when I'm cruisin' through your **edit** hood
And **edit** **edit**, Don't try to act like you don't know it me
And **edit**, You know what I'm sayin'?
I didn't put no tints on the **edit**
So you could see me **edit**
If I'm gonna spend $125,000 on some wheels
I want you to get a good look **edit** (haha uh)
Yeah, look at me, look at the license plate
The license plate say: "Get one **edit**" (haha)
Can you get one **edit**?"
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hahaha got to love fifty!
 
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