a story

[bothered]

Originally posted by: ChefJoe
Wasn't the christian apostle Paul known as Saul before he took the faith? Is this another religion thread ?

It would be interesting to subtly incorporate some religious ideas...maybe it could be metaphorically related to the father the son, the holy ghost, and mary. That would add some depth to it I guess.

 

[crumpet19]

Originally posted by: bothered

Originally posted by: ChefJoe
Wasn't the christian apostle Paul known as Saul before he took the faith? Is this another religion thread ?

It would be interesting to subtly incorporate some religious ideas...maybe it could be metaphorically related to the father the son, the holy ghost, and mary. That would add some depth to it I guess.

How about you add meaning before you add more depth.

 

[cain]

just dont come to my school and start shooting

 

[shimsham]

hmmm...not bad, but ive read it before.

 

[cavemanmoron]

worst fiction i have read this month.

buy a book by stephenhunter

read it,or more than one....

 

[sillymofo]

Originally posted by: PatboyX
and all this time id thought melodrama died.

:cricket;

 

[Azraele]

It's deep, but I don't really get it.

 

[dafatha00]

"What you've just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever heard. At no point in your rambling, incoherent response were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this room is now dumber for having listened to it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul."

 

[whaleskinrug]

A vampire attacked its biological father that had long ago abandoned it, and the mom vampire was overwhelmed because she was on a low-blood diet and didn't want to see the son vampire be like the dad vampire yet still hated the former dad vampire

 

[Medea]

 

[Medea]

Originally posted by: Reon
just dont come to my school and start shooting

LOL. Can't you see the newspaper article?
"As authorities searched for "bothered's" motivation for his acts, several sources have stated that several morbid stories were found on his computer - most of them reportedly had him falling into pools of blood."

 

[PatboyX]

it actually reminds me of one of those old gardner writing excersizes.

 

[bothered]

Originally posted by: PatboyX
it actually reminds me of one of those old gardner writing excersizes.

Ah, from The Art of Fiction? That's the second reference to that book I've heard in a day. Maybe I should buy it.

Originally posted by: Medea

Originally posted by: Reon
just dont come to my school and start shooting

LOL. Can't you see the newspaper article?
"As authorities searched for "bothered's" motivation for his acts, several sources have stated that several morbid stories were found on his computer - most of them reportedly had him falling into pools of blood."

lol :-D

 

[alkemyst]

Where's the part where the n00b writer gets killed?

Hmmmm let's see ENC101, 1st project of the term due Friday....let's incorporate blood (teh girlz will think I a kewl dude or vampyre, goth chicks rock)....

hmmm find another story, obscure ... do a bloody paraphrase

I iz da next Pulitzer winnar!

 

[Bulk Beef]

Will somebody please tell me WTF Saul is?

 

[VirginiaDonkey]

I fell asleep reading it........whazitsay?

 

[alkemyst]

Originally posted by: sward666
Will somebody please tell me WTF Saul is?

I think it was the original poster's boyfriend or the guy he walked in on with his mom. I got confused by the blood.

 

[Pepsi90919]

<wtf.wav>

 

[cloude27]

i have no idea whats going on....

 

[BennyD]

er.... nice

well done

 

[huesmann]

Profundity is overrated. Shallow is the way to go.

 

[Aharami]

eh??

 

[DurocShark]

Originally posted by: gunblade
Seem like an excuse to his mum of beating the guy Saul to death.

Originally posted by: Whade
Son killed deadbeat Dad?

yeah that is what I understand too.

Me too.