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a poem I wrote during a realy rough spot in my life

who thinks this poem is good and that people makig fun of me must stop?

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brianmanahan

brianmanahan

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just a pome i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark

edit: changed "pome" to "poem" in the thread title, because it was annoying me in the way that someone scraping their fingers over a chalkboard would be annoying. -DrPizza

Necro'ing your own thread for further attention whore reasons is a new low.

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brianmanahan said:
just a poem i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark
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quoted in case OP regrets posting this
 
brianmanahan said:
regrets? this is parhaps my best work ever, it is deep down to the well of my soull
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"Parhaps" you should take some English classes instead of Engrish classes to improve your writing "abillity."

I certainly hope your "pome" isn't a tome...


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pome

"In botany, a pome (after the Latin word for fruit: pōmum) is a type of fruit produced by flowering plants in the subfamily Maloideae of the family Rosaceae."

I see lxskllr has it covered...
 
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I read your "pome" to my cat, not the happy, playful one, but the petulant little morose fucker that won't let me pet him, and even he rolled his eyes.
 
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