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Based on ACE being a high school, I would recommend removing it from the resume. Rename the section CERTFICATIONS and list the relevant info there. You have several years of work history, and at this point most people will assume you are at least a high school grad, so it's unnecessary.
 

sao123

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Originally posted by: MikeyIs4Dcats
Originally posted by: SOSTrooper
I don't have time to revise your entire resume, but I guess I can say that there's too much jargon about what you did; some of them are too specific and detailed. Leave those out and keep it straight to the point and simple. You're also missing Objective and Qualifications. You want the employer to know you have a 'direction' of how you'll accomplish the job they're going to give you, as well as skills you have that might not fit into your work experience, such as your 'team oriented skills and ability to solve problems.' Keep it one page and leave the unimportant things out. If I'm an employer I want to read the best things you got and did, not everything that you did.

*edit* also expand your margins a bit and try not to indent too much and use Arial or some other more 'compact' but readable fonts so you can fit large amount of information into one page.



OBJECTIVES are the most pointless thing you can put on a resume. Do some research.



I disagree.

Should You Use a Career Objective on Your Resume?

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by Katharine Hansen
It's one of those sticky questions that divides career counselors. If you got 100 of them in a room, 50 would likely say yes, you should list a career objective on your resume; the other half would probably say no.

Those arguing against objectives say they are too limiting and usually poorly constructed. Those in favor say that employers want to be able to determine in just a few seconds what you want to do for the organization, and what you're good at. An objective can help meet that employer need. To some employers, the lack of an objective translates into a jobseeker who doesn't know what he or she wants. On the other hand, numerous employers say they rarely see a well-written objective.

There's no doubt that many resume career objectives are poorly put together. To avoid limiting themselves, too many jobseekers write objectives that are woefully vague, thus defeating the purpose of presenting an objective.

Jobseekers also tend to ignore the employer's need to know what the candidate can contribute, instead considering the objective as an invitation to list everything the jobseeker wants, needs or desires from the sought-after job. A typical self-serving objective is one along these lines:


Career objective: To obtain a meaningful and challenging position that enables me to learn the accounting field and allows for advancement.
Before we address the issue of vague and self-serving career objectives, let's look at the pros and cons of using them at all.

The argument against limiting oneself is not without merit. After all, if your career objective doesn't match what the hiring manager has to offer, he or she is not likely to give serious consideration to other niches within the company that you might fit into.

In this high-tech age, however, fear of limiting oneself need not be an excuse to leave a career objective off your resume. With your computer's word-processing program, there's no reason you can't have several versions of your resume with several different objectives. In fact, you might have two or three versions of your resume in which the only difference is your objective. You could even come up with a specific, tailor-made objective on your resume for each job you apply for. With technology, resumes and objectives need not be "one size fits all." Of course, if you go to a career fair, where it's impossible to tailor your objective as you move from booth to booth, or if you're handing out resumes in a networking situation, it may make more sense to leave your objective off.

In some situations, limiting oneself actually is a compelling reason in favor of using an objective. In one recent letter to the Career Doctor, Dr. Randall Hansen, the job-seeker said he used his objective to state his desire not to relocate out of the city in which he was living. Although this limiting factor spoke more to the job-seeker's needs than the employer's, it could save a lot of time. Employers would not waste time interviewing him only to discover that he would not relocate. The job-seeker also had the option of mentioning his desire not to relocate in his cover letter instead of his resume objective.

One survey indicates that about 40 percent of employers want to see an objective on jobseekers' resumes. That 40 percent figure should give the "objecti-phobe" pause; it's a pretty convincing argument in favor of using an objective. If 40 percent of employers would be annoyed not to see an objective on your resume, using one may be the safest choice. As someone who doesn't care much for objectives, I'm not annoyed when jobseekers include them (unless they are dreadfully and self-servingly written), and I suspect like-minded employers would feel the same way.

On the other hand, those still uncomfortable with committing themselves to an objective on their resume can use their cover letters to help them tailor their resumes to the specific jobs they're applying for. The cover letter can help bring the resume into sharper focus by elaborating on what the jobseeker wants to do and what he or she can specifically contribute to a particular job.

Increasingly, jobseekers are supplementing -- or replacing -- their objectives with a section called "Summary," "Skills Summary," "Qualifications," "Profile," or the like. Spotlighting skills can be quite appealing to employers, and the keywords used in such sections can be an important element of a resume that's electronically scanned.

Bottom line? Whether or not to list an objective on your resume is a highly personal decision, but a decision in favor of the objective is worth considering because many employers like to see them. Further:

If you do use an objective, make it very specific, not vague and meaningless. Here's one I really like that one of my students wrote: "To manage people, interface with customers, and work with highly technical software or hardware applications." I like it because it's specific but not limiting. This objective could apply to many different jobs, yet the skills described are quite specific.
Objectives should reflect the employer's perspective, not the jobseeker's, and should tell what the jobseeker can contribute. An objective should demonstrate the value the candidate will add to the organization.
Objectives should be as concise as possible.
Objectives may help sharpen the focus of your resume, especially if your experience is very diverse, or you are switching into a career not supported by the experience listed on your resume.
If you choose not to list an objective on your resume, you may choose to discuss your objective in your cover letter.
Whether or not you choose to include an objective, you may wish to present a skills or qualifications section on your resume.
 
Nov 5, 2001
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Originally posted by: sao123
Originally posted by: MikeyIs4Dcats
Originally posted by: SOSTrooper
I don't have time to revise your entire resume, but I guess I can say that there's too much jargon about what you did; some of them are too specific and detailed. Leave those out and keep it straight to the point and simple. You're also missing Objective and Qualifications. You want the employer to know you have a 'direction' of how you'll accomplish the job they're going to give you, as well as skills you have that might not fit into your work experience, such as your 'team oriented skills and ability to solve problems.' Keep it one page and leave the unimportant things out. If I'm an employer I want to read the best things you got and did, not everything that you did.

*edit* also expand your margins a bit and try not to indent too much and use Arial or some other more 'compact' but readable fonts so you can fit large amount of information into one page.



OBJECTIVES are the most pointless thing you can put on a resume. Do some research.



I disagree.

Should You Use a Career Objective on Your Resume?

Printer-Friendly Version

by Katharine Hansen
It's one of those sticky questions that divides career counselors. If you got 100 of them in a room, 50 would likely say yes, you should list a career objective on your resume; the other half would probably say no.

Those arguing against objectives say they are too limiting and usually poorly constructed. Those in favor say that employers want to be able to determine in just a few seconds what you want to do for the organization, and what you're good at. An objective can help meet that employer need. To some employers, the lack of an objective translates into a jobseeker who doesn't know what he or she wants. On the other hand, numerous employers say they rarely see a well-written objective.

There's no doubt that many resume career objectives are poorly put together. To avoid limiting themselves, too many jobseekers write objectives that are woefully vague, thus defeating the purpose of presenting an objective.

Jobseekers also tend to ignore the employer's need to know what the candidate can contribute, instead considering the objective as an invitation to list everything the jobseeker wants, needs or desires from the sought-after job. A typical self-serving objective is one along these lines:


Career objective: To obtain a meaningful and challenging position that enables me to learn the accounting field and allows for advancement.
Before we address the issue of vague and self-serving career objectives, let's look at the pros and cons of using them at all.

The argument against limiting oneself is not without merit. After all, if your career objective doesn't match what the hiring manager has to offer, he or she is not likely to give serious consideration to other niches within the company that you might fit into.

In this high-tech age, however, fear of limiting oneself need not be an excuse to leave a career objective off your resume. With your computer's word-processing program, there's no reason you can't have several versions of your resume with several different objectives. In fact, you might have two or three versions of your resume in which the only difference is your objective. You could even come up with a specific, tailor-made objective on your resume for each job you apply for. With technology, resumes and objectives need not be "one size fits all." Of course, if you go to a career fair, where it's impossible to tailor your objective as you move from booth to booth, or if you're handing out resumes in a networking situation, it may make more sense to leave your objective off.

In some situations, limiting oneself actually is a compelling reason in favor of using an objective. In one recent letter to the Career Doctor, Dr. Randall Hansen, the job-seeker said he used his objective to state his desire not to relocate out of the city in which he was living. Although this limiting factor spoke more to the job-seeker's needs than the employer's, it could save a lot of time. Employers would not waste time interviewing him only to discover that he would not relocate. The job-seeker also had the option of mentioning his desire not to relocate in his cover letter instead of his resume objective.

One survey indicates that about 40 percent of employers want to see an objective on jobseekers' resumes. That 40 percent figure should give the "objecti-phobe" pause; it's a pretty convincing argument in favor of using an objective. If 40 percent of employers would be annoyed not to see an objective on your resume, using one may be the safest choice. As someone who doesn't care much for objectives, I'm not annoyed when jobseekers include them (unless they are dreadfully and self-servingly written), and I suspect like-minded employers would feel the same way.

On the other hand, those still uncomfortable with committing themselves to an objective on their resume can use their cover letters to help them tailor their resumes to the specific jobs they're applying for. The cover letter can help bring the resume into sharper focus by elaborating on what the jobseeker wants to do and what he or she can specifically contribute to a particular job.

Increasingly, jobseekers are supplementing -- or replacing -- their objectives with a section called "Summary," "Skills Summary," "Qualifications," "Profile," or the like. Spotlighting skills can be quite appealing to employers, and the keywords used in such sections can be an important element of a resume that's electronically scanned.

Bottom line? Whether or not to list an objective on your resume is a highly personal decision, but a decision in favor of the objective is worth considering because many employers like to see them. Further:

If you do use an objective, make it very specific, not vague and meaningless. Here's one I really like that one of my students wrote: "To manage people, interface with customers, and work with highly technical software or hardware applications." I like it because it's specific but not limiting. This objective could apply to many different jobs, yet the skills described are quite specific.
Objectives should reflect the employer's perspective, not the jobseeker's, and should tell what the jobseeker can contribute. An objective should demonstrate the value the candidate will add to the organization.
Objectives should be as concise as possible.
Objectives may help sharpen the focus of your resume, especially if your experience is very diverse, or you are switching into a career not supported by the experience listed on your resume.
If you choose not to list an objective on your resume, you may choose to discuss your objective in your cover letter.
Whether or not you choose to include an objective, you may wish to present a skills or qualifications section on your resume.



when I look at resumes for positions, the objectives are often laughable because people don't know what to do. When in doubt, leave it off. We all get that you want a job doing what you applied for, so thanks for putting that at the top of the page.
 
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Originally posted by: 6StringSamurai
Ok so, I have received quite a few good entries, you guys are so much better at this than me. To answer a few of the questions, the resume will be printed and emailed. Oh and also, the prize is up to 20$ and will be given out at noon tomorrow, several people asked for extensions on the time, since they saw it so late. So, I will extend it once, since frankly, it helps me out. lol.


So...noon has come and gone in NC. Whats the verdict?
 

6StringSamurai

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Well the contest is over, sorry about the 2 hours of deliberation. But I finally went with a slightly modified version of sao123's design, he also put effort into rewording the descriptions.. My resume had been on monster for a week before with no hits, within 15 minutes of his being uploaded, I had an email from the director of HR for a local software company requesting an immediate interview for a 75k job. So Sao, even though you were an ass, :D , thank you! What address should I send this 30$ ?

To the others, thank you so much for your effort and advice it was highly appreciated!!
 

sao123

Lifer
May 27, 2002
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Originally posted by: 6StringSamurai
Well the contest is over, sorry about the 2 hours of deliberation. But I finally went with a slightly modified version of sao123's design, he also put effort into rewording the descriptions.. My resume had been on monster for a week before with no hits, within 15 minutes of his being uploaded, I had an email from the director of HR for a local software company requesting an immediate interview for a 75k job. So Sao, even though you were an ass, :D , thank you! What address should I send this 30$ ?

To the others, thank you so much for your effort and advice it was highly appreciated!!

YGPM
 

6StringSamurai

Senior member
Apr 10, 2006
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Originally posted by: sao123
Originally posted by: 6StringSamurai
Well the contest is over, sorry about the 2 hours of deliberation. But I finally went with a slightly modified version of sao123's design, he also put effort into rewording the descriptions.. My resume had been on monster for a week before with no hits, within 15 minutes of his being uploaded, I had an email from the director of HR for a local software company requesting an immediate interview for a 75k job. So Sao, even though you were an ass, :D , thank you! What address should I send this 30$ ?

To the others, thank you so much for your effort and advice it was highly appreciated!!

YGPM

You got Paypal, and thanks again! :)