YAFRT: Yet another flyer review thread

mooglemania85

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I like #4, but think you need a better line than just, "She wants to dance. Be ready."

#1 kind of scares me.
"Don't know how? We'll Teach You."
You just need to add the "MUHAHAHAHAHAHA" at the end.
 

Goosemaster

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Originally posted by: mooglemania85
I like #4, but think you need a better line than just, "She wants to dance. Be ready."

#1 kind of scares me.
"Don't know how? We'll Teach You."
You just need to add the "MUHAHAHAHAHAHA" at the end.

:D

I need to fix that line.:D

As for number 4, do you have any ideas?

"want to be the life of the party?" and other such crap is lame...which is why I went with a situational statement [she wants to dance] but is the extent of any wit that I may have:p