YAFRT: Yet another flyer review thread

[Goosemaster]

General Dance Flyer

Salsa Flyer 1

Salsa Flyer 2

Salsa Flyer 3

Salsa Flyer 4


Hopefully at least one of them is okay...

I was telling people I wanted to make one with just a picture of some sexy heels and make it a play on "nice shoes..wanna fvk?" but I am too tired and need to go to bed


The dates, times, and places aren't consistent because i was focused more about the design since the dates and such aren't set i stone yet.

 

[Aharami]

:thumbsup:

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: Aharami
:thumbsup:

thank you

any particular one i should stick to?

ink is expensive and I need to make a boatload of copies

 

[mooglemania85]

I like #4, but think you need a better line than just, "She wants to dance. Be ready."

#1 kind of scares me.
"Don't know how? We'll Teach You."
You just need to add the "MUHAHAHAHAHAHA" at the end.

 

[BRObedoza]

i like the last three.

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: mooglemania85
I like #4, but think you need a better line than just, "She wants to dance. Be ready."

#1 kind of scares me.
"Don't know how? We'll Teach You."
You just need to add the "MUHAHAHAHAHAHA" at the end.

I need to fix that line.

As for number 4, do you have any ideas?

"want to be the life of the party?" and other such crap is lame...which is why I went with a situational statement [she wants to dance] but is the extent of any wit that I may have