Will you critque my animation?

[OmnipotentSpleen]

hey guys...just finished this up the other night. it'd like to know what you think (constructive criticism only please), it still needs some work. (camera angle/movement in 3rd shot will be fixed)

48 seconds with sound, 8.14mb, vcd MPEG format, I think the max download speed is around ~300k/s

http://members.cox.net/falsecathedral/demo.mpg


...know anyone who needs a character animator? 😀

 

[Crusty]

Im getting 370k, will edit after I watch it.


Edit:

I like it overall, but I think that the walking in the beginning could be better tuned to the beat of the music. And like you said the camera switching and angles need a tad bit of work.

But, good job. I am impressed.

 

[Brutuskend]

Not bad!

 

[nick1985]

cool

 

[nick1985]

dp

 

[AFB]

Rox, work on switching angles.

 

[zimu]

wow, thats really awesome dude!

apart from the scene changes, nothing i think you could add, its great!

 

[StageLeft]

Very good, and a neat idea for it too.

 

[Psycho18]

OH MAN!!! I'd love to create star wars characters if i knew how to do that. Thats awsome man.

 

[RaynorWolfcastle]

Very nice. Small detail I noticed, your guy places his hands the wrong way when he picks up the bat to hit the ball. The top hand should be facing the ball, I'm sure no one else saw it but I couldn't help but notice.

 

[hawkeye81x]

Originally posted by: RaynorWolfcastle
Very nice. Small detail I noticed, your guy places his hands the wrong way when he picks up the bat to hit the ball. The top hand should be facing the ball, I'm sure no one else knowing but I couldn't help but notice.

He is most certainly batting very awkwardly.
If you live in the L.A. area, there are plenty of film companies looking for animation/modeling experts.
A few job ops

 

[Koing]

Originally posted by: Skoorb
Very good, and a neat idea for it too.

You got skills man. Looks very good to me. Greta idea also.

Music and sound effects go well also 😀

You got talent!

Koing