Who's great with not only grammar, but writing in general that wants to help?

[Zeze]

I have a corp assignment which is very important to me. It's crucial the the piece is written not just concisely, but is effective and making an impact.

I can't post it here for privacy reasons. Could someone give me a personal critique? It's no longer than few paragraphs.

Please shoot me a PM. I would also like multiple views.

Thanks!

 

[BoomerD]

Ah ar guud wryter, butt ah don wan git envohlvd

 

[xanis]

You can shoot me a PM if you want, I'll take a quick look.

 

[Rastus]

It was a dark and stormy night.

 

[SandEagle]

I is.

 

[arcenite]

I put on my robe and wizard hat

 

[Zeze]

Morning bump! Any help guys?

 

[KidNiki1]

I will look it over for you if you like.

My phone rawks! HTC yeah bayyybeee

 

[gorcorps]

spaceman

 

[gorcorps]

I have a corp assignment which is very important to me. It's crucial the the piece is written not just concisely, but is effective and making an impact.

I can't post it here for privacy reasons. Could someone give me a personal critique? It's no longer than few paragraphs.

Please shoot me a PM. I would also like multiple views.

Thanks!

I can understand your concern...

 

[alkemyst]

what you paying?

 

[CZroe]

I'd love to. I did this often for my sister until she graduated UCSD.