Which pic do you like better?

[Key West]

With text:

Without:

The text is for the 'magazine ad' feel. I can't decide if it's just gimmicky.

f1.8 85mm 1/250 200iso

 

[lxskllr]

With text. There's a lot of blank space that looks like it's missing something.

 

[tatteredpotato]

Word are fine, but you need to pick different ones.

 

[UglyCasanova]

I would find a way to lose the drop shadows in the text and maybe make it smaller (the Romance at least).

 

[Key West]

I would find a way to lose the drop shadows in the text and maybe make it smaller (the Romance at least).

It's near illegible without drop shadow. Maybe I'd find another way to have it stand out.

 

[slayer202]

what is it for...

 

[Miramonti]

Keep the text, lose the clothes.

 

[deadlyapp]

what is it for...

cover for a porno flick

 

[GoodRevrnd]

Text placement is poor.

 

[Newbian]

Lack of chest area in the image makes me sad.

 

[Epic Fail]

Text placement is poor.

this, in paris is hard to read.

 

[mafia]

I'd suggest changing the text to "ROMANCE in Tokyo".

 

[LtPage1]

Why on earth would you voluntarily attempt to imitate an advertisement? That's an awful idea.

 

[Key West]

bump

 

[Krazy4Real]

Keep the text, lose the clothes.

this.

 

[Spoooon]

As other's said, change the text. Maybe if the Eiffel Tower was blurry in the background or something...

 

[Drako]

Change asian chick to perisian chick, or change text.

 

[coldmeat]

What's with the hair. Looks like a mane.

 

[AstroManLuca]

What's with the hair. Looks like a mane.

This. Her hair laying on her chin like that makes it kinda look like she has a beard.

 

[QueBert]

Lack of chest area in the image makes me sad.

Uhhh it's an Asian chick, the chest will look exactly like Justin Beibers, are you really said to not see a boy's chest??

 

[mmntech]

Uhhh it's an Asian chick, the chest will look exactly like Justin Beibers, are you really said to not see a boy's chest??

What, who says. Somewhat NSFW, :awe:

First pic is better. Text looks like it belongs.

 

[tatteredpotato]

Keep the text, lose the clothes.

Lack of chest area in the image makes me sad.

Quote 2 is why Quote 1 doesn't matter.