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What kind of gift would make a girl cry?

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Alrite...here goes......these are my pieces but I'm not sure if you would wanna take it. 😉 Just a little help.

Title.....falling...

Back to the day we first met,
It was June,
Her ever so fair skin,
Her long and graceful silky hair,

Her gorgeous looks,
I could not get my eyes of her,
Her slightest grin on her soft lips,
Melts my heart and opens the door in my life to take her in,

"Girl...I'm falling for you",
I held my feelings,
I held my words, I was stubborn,
I yield to my desire,the burning desire I have in me..she's the one....


'I Love You'
Words that she uttered soft spokenly; never was it so true;
never was it so real,
I was in nirvana, it was heaven on earth,
Eternal bliss was destined,

I could not sleep,
Not even once without hearing her voice,
I could only weep,
Having her next to me is the only choice,

'I had to go....'
Four simple words that broke my heart,
Heaven fell to earth; she had to leave me in this arena of cruelty,

The fall just continues knowing no barriers,

Heaven on earth turns to hell with no return,
Eternal bliss swayed to sheer torture,
Why would she??...How could she??
I'm lost in the misty darkness of the realm of pain....

Lonely days....
Lonely nights....
Seconds whizzed....
Minutes passed....
Hours came closer for each passing minutes....

Where is she?
Where is my direction of life?
I'm lost..lost in the emptiness deep within me,
Very lost...very lost

Starring out the windows,
Trying to reach out to the stars above,
Reaching for the answer to all my hollows,
Hollows in life and love,

Where is she....
Where is the once light that shone brightly above me....
How could she....
How could she leave me in this cold world....

Days passed....
I face the cold and inhabitable world alone,
Trying to fight for a place of my own away from my sheer emptiness,
Temptations woo me into the 'world of no return',

Where is she....
Where is she when I need here to answer my solemn....
Her most fervent touches....
Her most fervent touches which bring love and warmth....

Months passed....
I'm struggling to compete, pain and agony is what I'm feeling,
Competing to be a somebody on my own,
Insanity overpowers patience in the fight of time,

Where is she....
Where is the happiness that I once had in me....
Her laughter....
Her laughter that brings joy and happiness to me....

Years passed....
I could only walk the path that I had long chosen,
The path to go on, to wait and hope,
To hope that she would come back to me to be the only answer,


I'm waiting....
I'm waiting for you to break the fall....
I'm waiting for you to pick me up again....
I'm waiting for you to guide me to the path of happiness....

I'm waiting....
I'm waiting for your touches....
I'm waiting for your love....
I'm waiting for your words saying that you love me....
I'm waiting for you....


Title...The thought of you.....

The thought of you,
Is still fresh in my mind,
From the first day I met you,
I knew it will be hard for you to slip out of my mind.

The thought of you,
Makes my world a better place then before,
The feelings I have for you,
Begins to reveal itself more from within.

It's was the beginning of a brand new chapter in my life,
The thought of you,
Keeps me awake every single night,
Life was not as simple as it is with you.

You bring cheers when jeers are what I only hear,
You twist a simple faith into a happy memoir,
You.....
You're everything I had ever wanted.

You gave in to every single of my demands,
Never once remand,
You shower me with your love,
Making me fall into a deep clove.

I can't sleep,
When I know you're not around,
I can't one minute put you out of my mind,
As you're my guardian angel of the night.

Now that you're going,
The thought of you,
Will still remain deep in me,
For now and eternity...

Hope what I've written can help ya. I'm sure you'll know which poem is good for which situation..pending on the case. 😉

GOOD LUCK MAN!
 
hehe. i appreciate the replies you guys give but you gotta understand this isn't love yet. i think i'll be scaring her to hell if i told her i love her. i just really care for her and hope something develops.

following along the line of weyoun's suggestion, here's what i came up with. it's simple, yet honest.



I Didn't Know What to Get You

I didn't know what to get you,
so I got you this box.
It has four sides, a top, a bottom,
and it is square in shape.
There is nothing unique about this box,
nor is it a pretty box.
Its content is what makes it so special,
Because within the walls of this box, is my gift.

You can't touch my gift,
nor can you see my gift.
You can't smell my gift,
nor can you feel my gift.

It is a gift of trust,
that my actions will justify my good intentions.
It is a gift of honesty,
that the truth is never far from every word I speak.
It is a gift of understanding,
that I will keep an open mind.
And it is a gift of dependability,
that when you need me, I will be there.

So whenever you're feeling lonely,
or that life is incomplete.
Take out this box and remove the gift within,
Hold it close to your heart,
Because I didn't know what to get you,
So I got you this box,
And my gift is inside...
 
I'm glad i could help hoeboy 🙂

Basically, i wrote it on a piece of paper and folded it into 3 parts, with the middle part protruding to the surface. When a human sees writing on a paper, as if it was a note, curiosity usually prevails 🙂 Well that and i told the person who took the present to tell her to check the note first or they were dead 🙂

I wouldnt really worry, most polite ppl read the tag/card before opening the present anyway, MOST still being the keyword 😀 Just make absolutely sure she doesnt open the box, or you're a dead man 🙂

[EDIT]
just saw hoeboy's poem, it's pretty good although i think the last line could be changed to 'With all my love inside' that'd give it a really uplifting tone 🙂

[2nd EDIT]
just read the first part of your post 😛 it sounds pretty good, although this'd be a good opportunity to advance your relationship if you so desired
 
damn thats a lot of faces in one post weyoun 🙂 well i'm tryin to stay away from using the word love or even mentioning it. i know for a fact that she's the type to get scared away easily if i come off TOO strong. and i'm also the type to refuse that love exist 🙂
 
well that's ok i guess 🙂

as for the smiles, you're not the only one who's told me about my addiction to them, there's literally not a sentence i dont type in icq without one, it shocking!! 🙂

see what i mean? 😛
 
well theres nothing wrong with being happy. btw, did you jus give her a plain wrapped up box? i was thinking of getting a small tin box or something of that sort. much better to keep around than a christmas box. ehhe. if i can get that poem engraved on it, it would be cool too. except most places charge like a buck per letter and goddamn, thats one expensive gift.
 
hmm engraved. . a box like a cookie tin? get a painter friend to paint the message on.. . not as permanent, but it'll seem even more heart fealt cause it took getting a favor pulled, just an idea
 
SammySon-

I guess being with a woman for 8 years has some advantages, eh? 😉

No I don't work for Hallmark, but maybe I should give them a call? 😀

Unfortunately I'm into the rhyming thing. But I can fake the prose pretty well. I guess those AP Enlish classes were good for something afterall! 😉

amish
 
Try this:

Get a nice box
Write the sweetest love letter you've ever written to her... all your feelings, everything that she means to you...
Put it in the box... go to your local florist and ask them to put some fresh rose petals in the box (buy some roses if you feel like you still need more flowers)

Give to your girl, have tissue ready.

P.S. Don't forget to give this gift to her at a romantic time and place... like at the beach enjoying a sunset after having spent the entire day together having fun.

😀 Good luck dude.
 
Man, some of you guys are real saps. Sure i don't consider all women chicks but when you've been in a relationship for more than 5 years with the same woman, you get kinda lazy. It's like you guys are relationship experts or something. If this kid puts his heart and soul into something and this girl just shrugs it off and leaves anyway, he's gonna feel pretty bad. If she's leaving, she's leaving, get over it. If you "love" her that much, go after her, that'll speak louder than any crappy heart shaped pendant or jar full of freaking flies.
 
it never ceases to amaze me how guys like suicidal can score a girl and even maintain the relationship for 5 years.
 
i second that hoeboy, you can call me a sap, not a man, and all the other chauvanistic and standardised male crap that flows around the whole debacle about women, but i STAND BY WHAT I SAID. you aren't going to change that.

and sorry suicidal, it's not really like she had the choice to leave or not, her parents were seeking employment in New Zealand. Even if there was 0% chance of her staying, there's no chance in hell i wouldn't have given it to her, she means that much to me.

And Boberfett, that's your experience, not ours. I'm not going to the effort to be a 'sap', but rather truly trying to express myself. If there's anything wrong with that, then god help this world....

[EDIT]

Now onto hoeboy's question, no i just got a plain box, wrapped it up (make sure it isn't xmas paper if it's a going away present 🙂), tied it in ribbon and put a few things on it. Then folded up the tag and slipped it under the ribbon. By the looks of it, you want this gift to be your own creation - that's fine, just go with what you feel is right.
 
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