what do you think of this track

[Naer]

https://soundcloud.com/naer-zeitstein/more-with-less

 

[JJChicken]

The intro is grating and the beats are too disjointed.

The synth is okay.

Where are you going with it? It doesn't really go anywhere. I wouldn't really put it in any of my DJ sets.

Reduce the hi hats, fix up the beat imo and seperate the layers better, and you may be onto something!

Not a bad first shot, sorry if I'm being critical

 

[JJChicken]

To add - I actually really liked the main synth melody, just work on it a bit more.