To Dream a Dream

[LordRaiden]

Ok, I promise this is my last poem I'm posting.

Tell me what you think of it.

I go to bed to dream a dream.
A dream of love.
A dream of life.
A dream above.
A dream of strife.
A dream of fantacy and golden things.
A dream of reality and forbidden things.
I dream a dream.
A song.
A whisper.
A nightime breeze blowing warm in winter.
To dream forever is my want.
To dream forever is my wish.

 

[Skel]

It's ok, a C....

 

[CraigRT]

i have NO clue how to rate poems.. ego boosting A+ for you.

 

[Tom]

Nice job

I've been working on a poem but this is all i got..

I dreamt you were the pastrami
in the refrigerater in my closet

 

[AnyMal]

I can't believe someone voted with F Oh well, I enjoyed it. Keep'em coming!

 

[thirtythree]

A little too much repetition for me but there isn't a lot of poetry I like ..

BTW, fantasy is mispelled.

 

[Kev]

Originally posted by: AnyMal
I can't believe someone voted with F Oh well, I enjoyed it. Keep'em coming!

people just being douche's.

i gave it a b. you lost a letter because i had to read the word "dream" too many times.