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Naer

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Listen to Labor by NaerCrSaen #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/neits/labor

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SOFTengCOMPelec

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Listen to Labor by NaerCrSaen #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/neits/labor

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I'm surprised, because I can listen to most of the track, and be a bit relaxed by it. It is more easy listening than highly enjoyable.

I've noticed that lots of your tracks, have the following image as the album cover.

How can I put what I think of it, without causing a little bit of upset.
I imagine a typical youth (who has no artistic ability), would be able to eventually draw something, nearly as good, or better. In a few minutes.
But the picture is not that bad.

You never reply, so I won't get an answer. But how on earth have you got 43 followers on that site ?

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Naer

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Mainly from another forum I think I got these followers. I put zero effort in self promotion. May have a bit more if I had any marketing competence. Might trying to get heard from posting on other people's blogs. Haven't got around to it as of yet. As for the art, I think it looks OK. Art is subjective. I think it's pretty in a ugly way
 

SOFTengCOMPelec

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I agree art is very subjective, and I can see a little bit of "something" in it. But it does not seem quite right, yet to me.

Maybe you need a little bit of advice, from someone who is a little bit knowledgeable/skillful art wise. It seems to be missing a little something, and unfortunately has the look to it, that someone knocked it up in a few minutes, instead of taking hours or longer, like it should do, for better artists.

I'm still surprised how reasonable the music track was. I could imagine listening to it in some restaurant, as very quiet background music.
 

Naer

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I agree art is very subjective, and I can see a little bit of "something" in it. But it does not seem quite right, yet to me.

Maybe you need a little bit of advice, from someone who is a little bit knowledgeable/skillful art wise. It seems to be missing a little something, and unfortunately has the look to it, that someone knocked it up in a few minutes, instead of taking hours or longer, like it should do, for better artists.

I'm still surprised how reasonable the music track was. I could imagine listening to it in some restaurant, as very quiet background music.

ty, you're right i might switch the artwork with my other peices. It does look a little clipartish now that i think about it
 

SOFTengCOMPelec

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ty, you're right i might switch the artwork with my other peices. It does look a little clipartish now that i think about it

As long as the replacement picture, is significantly better, for music artwork purposes, then go for it.

Somehow/somewhere I seem to remember you discussing paying for someone to semi-professionally draw out a good album picture for you. But I could easily be mixed up, or remembering wrong.
I would suggest not paying any money, as you are way too unlikely to get the money back through extra sales of your work, at the moment. That my opinion.
But you might be able to get advice for free, which may help you improve what you have.