I agree art is very subjective, and I can see a little bit of "something" in it. But it does not seem quite right, yet to me.
Maybe you need a little bit of advice, from someone who is a little bit knowledgeable/skillful art wise. It seems to be missing a little something, and unfortunately has the look to it, that someone knocked it up in a few minutes, instead of taking hours or longer, like it should do, for better artists.
I'm still surprised how reasonable the music track was. I could imagine listening to it in some restaurant, as very quiet background music.