Thinking about sending a short, hand written "Thank you" note to my clients...

[adlep]

I am planning on sending the following "Thank you" note to all of my clients and I am not sure if something like the follwing is appriopriate:

"Thank you for using MY COMPANY. I hope that I have done a good job taking care of your computer service needs. Please, do not hesitate to use MY COMPANY again in the future and to refer my services to your family and friends.
Regards,
Adam L."

It looks fine to me, but I thought that I will seek some feedback before starting wasting cards and envelopes...
:-D

 

[shimsham]

i cant think of any reason why it would be innappropriate.

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: shimsham
i cant think of any reason why it would be innappropriate.

I just want to be sure it is gramatically correct as English is not my first language 😀

 

[ponyo]

kickbacks work better.

 

[bootymac]

It seems to focus a lot on you. I tried to fix it up a bit:

Thank you for using YOUR COMPANY! It was a pleasure helping you and we hope that everything has met your needs. We appreciate your business and we will be more than happy to service you again!

I know it doesn't mention anything about sharing your services, but it didn't fit in anywhere.

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: bootymac
It seems to focus a lot on you. I tried to fix it up a bit:

Thank you for using YOUR COMPANY! It was a pleasure helping you and we hope that everything has met your needs. We appreciate your business and we will be more than happy to service you again!

I know it doesn't mention anything about sharing your services, but it didn't fit in anywhere.

This is very good, but how do I incorporate the referal statement in a nice way into your correction?

 

[aplefka]

They'll refer you whether or not you put it in there. I think it sounds more personal if you DON'T put that line in there.

 

[adlep]

Originally posted by: bootymac
It seems to focus a lot on you. I tried to fix it up a bit:

Thank you for using YOUR COMPANY! It was a pleasure helping you and we hope that everything has met your needs. We appreciate your business and we will be more than happy to service you again!

I know it doesn't mention anything about sharing your services, but it didn't fit in anywhere.

Thanks a lot!
I am going to use your version for my notes.
😀