Faith is a means by which people who unconsciously hate themselves can be brought to a state of self acceptance in the understanding they are sinners but still loved by God, that they have been forgiven but as with everything else the cunning who love the ego and thus worship satin, turned faith into a religion of profit y convincing people to believe anything. Once people of blind belief in a religion are convinced that religion is political they can be convinced to believe anything including that they should have personal choice of worthless healthcare plans over something mandated that gives them something of quality. By this means of indoctrination, the association of ideology with virtue, a nation of marching morons who stab themselves in the back can be created. The faithful are impervious to reason.
Right, but you ignored this part: may I ask you how you would structure my paragraph, or, if not differently, maybe you can identify what you were actually feeling. You claim it's paragraphs but can't say why mine was wrong. Generally, when one can't support a criticism, it it's because something else is behind the nit-picking.
Fair enough, sorry I was distracted, so...
Faith is a means by which people who unconsciously hate themselves can be brought to a state of self acceptance in the understanding they are sinners but still loved by God, that they have been forgiven but as with everything else the cunning who love the ego and thus worship satin, turned faith into a religion of profit y convincing people to believe anything. (
this is a complete thought)
Once people of blind belief in a religion are convinced that religion is political they can be convinced to believe anything including that they should have personal choice of worthless healthcare plans over something mandated that gives them something of quality. (
another complete thought)
By this means of indoctrination, the association of ideology with virtue, a nation of marching morons who stab themselves in the back can be created. (
final complete thought)
The faithful are impervious to reason (
and summary in a single sentence)