think it'll do anything?

JacobJ

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Come now to bed before our lantern fades.
We?ll trace the light?s retreat with hands that climb
eachother?s graying skin, until the day?s
remorse is gone like wind in endless time.

We?ll glide like wine released from glass to glass
until the assonance of touch is met
with silent breath revealing life that?s passed
from light to dark, and dark to death?s regret.

The moon?s eternal glow will pause, and not
return one day. The sun will fail to catch
the moon with life, just as my flame will not
be lit by yours ? your egg?s already hatched.

But come to me my love, while we?re not old.
I?ll give myself to you, for you to hold.
 

JacobJ

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Originally posted by: Xionide
your egg's alerady hatched? Your trying to frick her!
lol...she'll know what it means...

but yeah...I can see how that would be kinda funny to most people.
 

chr6

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you're safe as long as you don't start the sonnet with 'there once was a man from nantucket'
 

amoeba

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I see that you chose to go with the Shakesperean Sonnet form instead of the Petrarchan sonnet form.
 

OrByte

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"think it'll do anything?"

well, maybe if she thinks guys talking about her eggs is sexay!

:confused:
 
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Paraphrase:


You and me baby ain't nothing but mammals,
So let's do it like they do on the Discovery Channel.








No hope. Poetry chicks don't want poets, dumbass....no more than a NBA player wants a WNBA player.
 

JulesMaximus

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Originally posted by: chr6
you're safe as long as you don't start the sonnet with 'there once was a man from nantucket'

ROFL :laugh:

Edit-Thanks for making laugh out loud at work...
 

mwtgg

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Originally posted by: HeroOfPellinor

No hope. Poetry chicks don't want poets, dumbass....no more than a NBA player wants a WNBA player.

It kinda seems pathetic and desperate... but I don't know your situation with her.

 

tfinch2

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Originally posted by: HeroOfPellinor
No hope. Poetry chicks don't want poets, dumbass....no more than a NBA player wants a WNBA player.

THE VOICE OF TRUTH HAS SPOKEN! ::bows down::

 

mwtgg

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Originally posted by: MartyMcFly3
She will say "Awwww thats so sweet. Youre such a good friend." then you are REALLY fvcked!

Your Partner in time,
MartyMcfly3

BINGO!