there was someone on here that could read essays

scorpmatt

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and help you out on them, is that person still with us, and if so, who is it? thanks

I have an essay that is due today and would like for them to look it over before I hand it in.
 

venk

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Why are all the high school latina girls preganant?

Because teacher told them to go home and do an essay. :Q
 

jlee

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How long is it? If it's short I may have the time..I won't claim to be an expert, though.
 

scorpmatt

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Originally posted by: venk
Why are all the high school latina girls preganant?

Because teacher told them to go home and do an essay. :Q

thread crapping is not allowed, thanks
 

jlee

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PM it to me as well - no promises if I'll have the time, but I do have a 4.0 in English..
 

scorpmatt

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Originally posted by: mwtgg
Originally posted by: scorpmatt
Originally posted by: mwtgg
Originally posted by: scorpmatt
Originally posted by: mwtgg
So what's it about?

I picked 2 sports compared them together, which one I liked better

Oh? What grade are you entering -- sixth?

taking english 101, working on getting 2 associates and then my bachelors

Wow... just wow.

yeah, its alot of work, did 2 years of worth of it in a year and a half, now im taking it a bit slower
 

Kadarin

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If you feel pretty confident in your work, post the essay here. You'll get some honest, if brutal, criticism.
 

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Originally posted by: Astaroth33
If you feel pretty confident in your work, post the essay here. You'll get some honest, if brutal, criticism.

PM would be best, atot is quite brutal.
 

Sheepathon

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Originally posted by: LordSnailz

PM would be best, atot is quite brutal.

Still, filtering out the random quips from the 15-year-olds and reading the fixes by people who know what they're doing will ultimately be more beneficial to the cause.