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The Disinfavored Son... (poem, if you hate poems.. sux 4 u.)

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Walleye

Banned
The ugly plant, in the corner
a weed considered
Never nurtured
too lazy to pluck

But yet, the weed perseveres
out of spite
out of sight
the weed grows on
doesnt die.

the weed grows on
overshadows the others
survives
pollinates
lives
grows
and wins.



- A Walleye Original.
 
unfavored was the original title, but because i have such an gloriful mastery over the language of english, my banana patch is just really potentified, and chickens taste like chicken, and well, disinfavored just sounded cooler. and more gloriful 😛
 
no. doesnt fit. the favored child recieves everything for nothing, the disinfavored child recieves nothing for everything. that's the purpose of the poem...
 
Originally posted by: bootymac
Originally posted by: Walleye
consideryself thankefied. not necessary is criticalwizzidum offy thar natural ist.
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CAPTAIN: WHAT YOU SAY ! !
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translation into your "unenlightened" speech is : thanks, though that sort of criticism wasnt needed.
 
Originally posted by: CorporateRecreation
that was pretty angsty dude, nice job 🙂
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angsty?

oh, thanks 🙂


5 minute poem, written for class, 5 minutes before it was due. some of my best work 🙂
 
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