the cruelty must stop!

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brianmanahan

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for too long we have been shackled
while our captors have cackled
and beaten us with whips
licked us with the lips
of their vicious cruelty

like animals we are caged
while the demons rage
and rip us to pieces
page by page

we can send up a prayer
but will the angels care?
is there anyone who can save us
grace us
thrust us past the fulcrum
of injustice which besets us?

i would say that it is all up to you
but in truth, there is nothing you can do
besides cower in fear
in darkness
in terror
waiting for your end to finally appear

or hope to have one moment of brilliance
carry through with what you know what to do
with diligence

and maybe
just maybe
save yourself from this savage nightmare
 

MonKENy

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Did I spur you to take up and bestow a new pome on us? There was a suggestions that we have a pome off.
 

brianmanahan

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Did I spur you to take up and bestow a new pome on us? There was a suggestions that we have a pome off.

no i didnt see that at all! :D

i was just feeling abit down last night, dont know what came over me tbh

but pomes are thereoputic and i feel alot better now
 

brianmanahan

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MonKENy said:
I have 10,000 ways to say I love you
But cannot find the words
I have 10,000 ways to love you back
but cannot find the tears

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MonKENy

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no i didnt see that at all! :D

i was just feeling abit down last night, dont know what came over me tbh

but pomes are thereoputic and i feel alot better now

I miss those feelings. I used to be able to write more frequently but the last few years its harder. I dont know if its because Im older and my mind has slowed down or because I am on mood stabilizers or im just lazy and out of practice
 

dud

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Sure to be a classic. Unfortunately, it is a bit too long (aka long-winded) to be used in one's sig.

OP, keep up the good work ...
 
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