thank you Ji-Wong

[JacobJ]

Thank You, Ji-Wong.

She wedges her thumb between her fingers
levitates her arm and groans a yes.

Last year, she was beaten half to death.
Now her neck stretches up and out,

her pearly whites somehow
there and glowing,

connecting me to something
I can?t see, but need, desperately.

 

[TuxDave]

Originally posted by: JacobJ
Thank You, Ji-Wong.

She pushes her thumb between her fingers
levitates her arm and groans a yes.

Last year, she was beaten half to death.
Now her neck stretches up and out,

her pearly whites somehow
there and glowing,

connecting me to something
I can?t see, but need, desperately.

ok

 

[her209]

huh?

 

[gistech1978]

'connecting me to something
I can?t see, but need, desperately'

cant decipher your poem, but i do like those two lines.

 

[JacobJ]

Originally posted by: gistech1978
'connecting me to something
I can?t see, but need, desperately'

cant decipher your poem, but i do like those two lines.

thanks