Heres one of my songs...I just wanna see what you guys think....no flames, please.
But if you do flame....at least make it a GOOD flame, and not something lame, k?
Here it is:
Too Good:
I can remember the day I first saw you
Id known you forever, but that day my eyes were opened wide
I was blinded by your brightness, emotion filled my heart
I want to tell you how I felt, but I dont know where to start
Suffice it to say, I loved you.
I was dying to tell you how I felt
I wanted so much just to let you know
But you already had another guy, somone to hold your hand
I may not have liked him, but breaking relationships isnt the plan
So Ill choke down my feelings for one more week
One month, one year, whatever it takes
At the very least I want you to know that Im here
Should you ever be in need of a friend or caring ear
Ill tell you
I love you
but you dont have to love me back
I know your too good for me
but your way too good for him
But if you do flame....at least make it a GOOD flame, and not something lame, k?
Here it is:
Too Good:
I can remember the day I first saw you
Id known you forever, but that day my eyes were opened wide
I was blinded by your brightness, emotion filled my heart
I want to tell you how I felt, but I dont know where to start
Suffice it to say, I loved you.
I was dying to tell you how I felt
I wanted so much just to let you know
But you already had another guy, somone to hold your hand
I may not have liked him, but breaking relationships isnt the plan
So Ill choke down my feelings for one more week
One month, one year, whatever it takes
At the very least I want you to know that Im here
Should you ever be in need of a friend or caring ear
Ill tell you
I love you
but you dont have to love me back
I know your too good for me
but your way too good for him
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