Tell me what you think about this song....

[Swag1138]

Ya know, if you want to.

"Not Quite Normal" by J. Swag.


Your far away..
I wish you were here with me
I thought today
what I wanted to be
I try to grow
try to move on from you
but I cant
you are the holder of my heart

I may not be
what you wanted me to be
but I could have been
anything you told me
I would have let you know
if I was not afraid
Im not quite normal

I had a dream
that we were together
we had a life
we would love forever
it filled my soul
with happiness
but then I woke up
and I was a mess

I cant believe
that I let you get away
what we could have been
has been derailed and gone astray
I should have let you know
but I was afraid
Im not quite normal

I see you when I sleep
I miss you when I wake
I think about how I
can fix that one mistake

I cant believe
that I let you get away
what we could have been
has been derailed and gone astray
I should have let you know
but I was afraid
Im not quite normal

I was afraid
Im not quite normal


well? I assume its better when it has the tune to it, but Im sure you can judge just fine from the lyrical content.

 

[prodigy]

Is that you Deeko? 😉

 

[gooseman]

lyrics are fine but lets hear it to some music.

 

[Maetryx]

I think it is at least as sophisticated as the stuff that gets played on pop radio. A nitpick: "your" should be "you're" in the first line.