Tell me what you think about my resume

[Martin]

Well, I finished school 2 weeks ago, so I figure its time to stop relaxing and start looking around.

Its a first draft, but let me know what you think:
http://individual.utoronto.ca/marty/resume.pdf

I'll be applying mainly to consulting and perhaps some project management, product management and development positions.

 

[mooglemania85]

offhand, get it down to 1 page. take out the word "tedious". since you just graduated, consider highlighting your education first.

 

[Martin]

I should have mentioned the things that bother me:
-I don't like that that first statement very much
-the last point in 'summary of qualifications'.. there's gotta be a better way to say that.
-4th year design project... its the last thing on there, even though I'd like everyone to reads the resume to check it out. Perhaps I should put on education first.

 

[alphatarget1]

Shorten it to 1 page. Highlights of your jobs would be enough (those 5 lines that summarize what you did).

Were your grades good? post them if so...

I'd go with this order instead:

Education
Summary of Qualifications (I don't even have one of these)
Experience
Technical skills

Replace "big picture" with something else...