Still another critique my resume thread.

[kag]

Summer is ending and like everyone else, I really need to find a job! I graduated last April so I don't have any work experience in the IT field, except for all the summer jobs related to computers that I could find.

I did my best to keep it down to one page. The objective section is vague, but that's because I don't care whether I get a job in programming, network, admin, etc., as long as it's not tech support.

How does it look? Positive criticism is always welcomed!

Acrobat version

Thanks
Guillaume

 

[gigapet]

try and think of something to put on there that sets you apart from the million others with the same creditials.

 

[Mo0o]

To me the professional experience section seems a little cluttered, just the way its organized. And im not sure if you're suppose to include references, not iclude them, or just put references avail upon request...

 

[SpunkyJones]

Don't worry about leaving it at one page, if you have more info that will set you apart, use it. It currently looks very generic and thin. Beef it up.

 

[kag]

Mo0o, I added a very small spacing between my jobs, so it now looks a bit less cluttered. That's the best I could do with the current format of my resume.

They say that even if you don't put "references avail upon request", they will ask you for some if they need them, so it's useless.

 

[UnatcoAgent]

It's very cluttered. Cut down on your font sizes, and try and make them more uniform.

 

[kag]

Hmm, it's funny how one thread will give you tips (two months ago) and another seems to go in the complete opposite direction.

 

[mugs]

I don't like the << and >>... looks like you forgot to do a mail merge or something. 🙂 And are those all the languages you know, or only the ones you'd like to use in a job? No java?

 

[kag]

Originally posted by: mugs
I don't like the << and >>... looks like you forgot to do a mail merge or something. 🙂 And are those all the languages you know, or only the ones you'd like to use in a job? No java?

Oops, those are actually the correct french equivalent of an english "

 

[mugs]

Silly French. In that case just remove them from around Crystal Reports, everyone knows what Crystal Reports is.