some constructive criticism please

[M00T]

If you have some free time, check this page and tell me what you think. It's my first, but i'm trying. Any advice on what to add would be great

http://home.earthlink.net/~xaik/index.html

as always, I return to NEFdom now.

 

[RSI]

That's excellent for your first web page, keep up the good work.

 

[RU482]

keep up the good work

 

[Blayze]

thats great for your first page
keep up the good work

 

[Pennstate]

Do you work on computrs for the army?

 

[M00T]

i'm supposed to be working on them in the marines, but i rarely do.

 

[Pennstate]

So what do you do all day?

 

[MrsSkywalker]

MOOT: Your main page is excellent! I wouldn't change a thing on that. Are you still in the process of designing your index pages? Possibly titling the pictures a little more clearly would be good. Are you looking to get into this for a profession? You have a very good eye for it Keep at it and throw up the link again when it's all set!

 

[hubbs]

Do you have a bad scanner or what. Because them pictures are very blurry?

It looks as if you were taking all the pictures from something sitting on top of your computer? Like a camera maybe? Beats me?

They are kinda fuzzy though. But otherwise real nice job on the page

 

[Angrymarshmello]

Nice work so far. Only thing is on your pictures pages, there's really no need to thumbnail those collages if you just set the width and height of the full size pictures to like 25% - the person will end up downloading all the pictures in their full size form. If you dont have access to photoshop or paint shop pro its cool but if you do, shrink em down so the thumbnails are only like 8-15k in size. Otherwise good job!