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It's not the size of an army, but the fury of it's onslaught...eventually reached a decent compromise between size and performance (hyuck hyuck hyuck!)...
It's not the size of an army, but the fury of it's onslaught
Anand : Very nice article! Fun reading for an EE.
Unless you show specific example of errors in grammar, your comment doesn't have much merit. There's no reason to alienate part of Anandtech's reader base with superfluous language (see what I did there?).Good read, just wish the writing was better. It's a shame that the site is becoming increasingly a destination for other media outlets for information in computer hardware/IT, yet the writing is still stuck, in many cases, with 8th grade grammar use.
Unless you show specific example of errors in grammar, your comment doesn't have much merit. There's no reason to alienate part of Anandtech's reader base with superfluous language (see what I did there?).
First, vain is NOT the correct word....it's VEIN. VAIN is an emotion.In the same vain that Steve Jobs is successful because he is a product guy at heart, running a company who is best known for their products.
Good read, I just wish the writing was better. It's a shame that the site is becoming increasingly a destination for other media outlets for information in computer hardware/IT, yet the writing is still stuck, in many cases, with 8th grade grammar use.
OK....here's one sentence with multiple problems:
First, vain is NOT the correct word....it's VEIN. VAIN is an emotion.
Second, a company is NEVER a WHO. The word to be used was either which or that. (Or even better, simply leave out the superfluous "who is" and write "a company best known....")
Third, the sentence mixed a singular noun and plural possessive pronoun.....a company---their products. As a company is a singular entity, ITS should have been used as the possessive pronoun, not their.
And fourth, that sentence isn't even a complete sentence but a long sentence fragment.
And this is in just one sentence. 8th grade English isn't that sloppy.
In the same vein that Steve Jobs is successful because he is a product guy at heart, running a company best known for its products. Jonney Shih is an engineer at heart, and he runs a company who has always been known for their excellence in engineering.
In the same vein that Steve Jobs is successful because he is a product guy at heart running a company best known for its products, Jonney Shih is an engineer at heart and runs a company which has always been known for its excellence in engineering.
Zing! (could also have replaceduse with usage, but meh).Ironic with missing pronoun, the double for, and over use of commas.
Maybe replace the second for with to acquire or something?
Edit: Use is redundant when referring to grammar as a whole.
Right, but that's one sentence. The whole article isn't like that, which was the point I was going to make. Maybe they'd be happy to have someone proofread for them.OK....here's one sentence with multiple problems:
This is what makes Anandtech stand out from the rest of the boys in the band. Great article! I really enjoyed reading the RV770 Story and this was not a dissapointment.
Good read, just wish the writing was better. It's a shame that the site is becoming increasingly a destination for other media outlets for information in computer hardware/IT, yet the writing is still stuck, in many cases, with 8th grade grammar use.
From the article said:The idea of taking such a huge risk made Carrell uncomfortable. Running two GPU designs in parallel, for the same family of chips, is risky. If everything works out perfectly, you get two chips out at the same time. If it doesn’t, you’ve just tied up two design teams on one product generation. A slip here would give ATI its own Fermi.
I really liked the RV770 article and this one is just as great. The only thing that'd be really cool would be if there were a similar article about nVidia - but I fear that won't happen.. completely different attitudes
I really liked the RV770 article and this one is just as great. The only thing that'd be really cool would be if there were a similar article about nVidia - but I fear that won't happen.. completely different attitudes
I enjoy the articles like this, the ones that kind of give us hardware enthusiasts a glimpse of what goes on to get these things built and out on the market.
http://www.anandtech.com/video/showdoc.aspx?i=3740&p=8
Regarding Nvidia, I though the discussion here regarding their separate strategies was very interesting. I definitely learned something new by reading that.
But you are right, we have to wonder what features Nvidia is planning? With their weaker process technology I have to wonder if they are trying to develop some type of "pooled/shared" VRAM for multiple GPUs. That could help them tremendously considering ATI is able to more efficiently produce larger chips on early nodes.