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T3C

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Well, since I recieved really good feedback from everyone here last time I asked for suggestion I figured why not do it again. I have made most all of the changes that you guy's suggested. So here is the new design. www.rockriverbiz.com


Thanks in advance for any new feedback!

-TechITguy
 
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akubi

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much nicer. :beer:

but the rounded lower right corner img in the menus on the left is terribly jagged. looks like you freehanded it in ms paint.
 
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T3C

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Originally posted by: akubi
much nicer. :beer:

but the rounded lower right corner img in the menus on the left is terribly jagged. looks like you freehanded it in ms paint.
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Gotta get that fixed.

Thanks!
 

"Welcome to rockriverbiz.com"

I would atleast capitalize R, if not all the letters where its at on the top of your page.
 
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Rip the Jacker

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Much better, except that the "ads" on the right side's fonts are not very sharp. I'd use different fonts on the images.
 
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T3C

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Originally posted by: ItmPls
Much better, except that the "ads" on the right side's fonts are not very sharp. I'd use different fonts on the images.
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Thanks for the feedback! We wil change them
 
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Syran

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Justified text means to adjust the spacing within (lines in a document, for example), so that the lines end evenly at a straight margin. (stole it from websters.)

I agree with alot of the suggestions made so far, more room between main content and left hand menu, round borders on the banner. I would also round the top borders on the Featured Business page.

On the sauk valley events.com link, the word wrapping makes it look bad, imo. I would make it 2 lines, centered, and drop the .com at the end. Also, since i'm assuming its a location, proper capitalization would be nice as well.

Speaking of the .com, I think its overused on the page. I'm not sure if its the full title of your actual business, and it looks great in the Banner, I don't like the use in the Welcome to rockriverbiz.com thing. I would put something else there, maybe just Rock River Businesses or something; just looks a bit overused imho.

Nice job :)
 
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T3C

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Originally posted by: Syran
Justified text means to adjust the spacing within (lines in a document, for example), so that the lines end evenly at a straight margin. (stole it from websters.)

I agree with alot of the suggestions made so far, more room between main content and left hand menu, round borders on the banner. I would also round the top borders on the Featured Business page.

On the sauk valley events.com link, the word wrapping makes it look bad, imo. I would make it 2 lines, centered, and drop the .com at the end. Also, since i'm assuming its a location, proper capitalization would be nice as well.

Speaking of the .com, I think its overused on the page. I'm not sure if its the full title of your actual business, and it looks great in the Banner, I don't like the use in the Welcome to rockriverbiz.com thing. I would put something else there, maybe just Rock River Businesses or something; just looks a bit overused imho.

Nice job :)
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Thanks for explaining that. We will be making changes and using this.

Thanks again
-TechITguy
 
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