Resume - Updated with your advice...

Stealth1024

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Alright I'm working on moving the top around to make it less cluttered.

Some might think there's a lot of info here but a lot of things are requested by various companies so I tried to cram it all in there...
 

johnjbruin

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initial thoughts:

borders too wide... seems like a lack of content.

too much white space on paper

will look more and tell you
 

johnjbruin

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My HR person told me never to put the line "References available upon request on your resume" - its implied - because if you dont you are SOL.

Any extra-curricular activitis in school? clubs etc? any leadership experience?

Any prizes/awards/scholarships/(maybe even deans lists etc.) ?

Any research you have done?
 

LostHiWay

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too much white space...give more details about what you've done.

Also take out the objective and interests...no one cares
 

Stealth1024

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Two much white space? Well when I print it I think the page is rather full with information, I mean I will gladly discuss the details of tons of projects I've done during an interview...
 

GasX

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1. spell check (pursuit...)
2. your personal information is hard to read. The phone numbers span both columns but the address is only on one.
 

saxophonoia

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Personally i would make your own format rather than use a Word template, granted it's a little different with the font you have but it's close. Everyone has those and making your own lets you stand out that much more.