Random urban shot...like the concept, if not the execution?

Deadtrees

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Would've been better if it wasn't blurry at all or more blurry. The angle is ackward and the vertical line tilting slightly toward to the left makes it look uncomfortable.

Cropping out entire left or right section would be better.
 

Kelvrick

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Picture lacks a focal point for me. I read the poster, but got distracted by the guy on the left. Needs more depth of field too.

I personally think it would have been great if the picture was more to the right with an older middle aged guy sitting down with a lunch bag waiting for the bus with tons of traffic on the right.
 

Deadtrees

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The one below looks much better yet I think if you framed it following Golden Ratio, I think it'd been better.
 

dug777

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Originally posted by: Deadtrees
The one below looks much better yet I think if you framed it following Golden Ratio, I think it'd been better.

Well, i could crop it anyway i so desired, it just happened to be something that caught my eye ;)