Post a poem that you wrote.

[So]

Originally posted by: Orsorum
Despite what you think
Other things being equal
This is no haiku

😛

Did you see my previous post in this thread? If not...uncanny.

 

[Orsorum]

Originally posted by: So

Originally posted by: Orsorum
Despite what you think
Other things being equal
This is no haiku

😛

Did you see my previous post in this thread? If not...uncanny.

😛 Of course I saw it. That's what I modeled my haiku after, silly! 😀

 

[Mo0o]

you think you are deep
But you really just suck
please stop posting now

 

[episodic]

I became a jar of wind,
Holding myself forever it seemed . . .
A sudden gush as it rushed forth
brought joy to my innerself
and the room was quiet.

 

[jagec]

You post a thread.
The ATOT crowd judges you.
Die in a fire.

 

[NoReMoRsE]

This is based on Arthur C. Clarke's "2001: A Space Odyssey":

ASCENT TO TRANSCENDENCE

On ancient lands of mother Earth,
The mighty lizard realm declined,
And Nature, eager for rebirth,
Foresaw the coming of mankind.

The man-apes of the barren plains
Were greeted by a slab of stone.
It planted murder in their veins;
Mankind ascended to his throne.

Emerging from the Earth's cocoon,
The atom bore man into space.
He found a mon'lith on the moon:
A relic of an alien race.

Mankind set foot upon the soil,
And gazed past Jupiter and Mars.
He shuffled off his mortal coil,
And took his place among the stars.

 

[aidanjm]

Originally posted by: Wallydraigle

Originally posted by: sao123

Like moths to a flame,
N00bs can't resist these forums.
Please go to hell now.

Note to self - a haiku

Mistaken was the
click that lead me here. Such a
waste. Never again.

Thread Trolls.
If it dont interest you. Dont post.

My haiku wasn't necessarily directed towards you. Your post actually has value, which is lacking in about 98% of the threads posted here these days. Maybe you just looked at my poem and saw your own n00biness staring back? 😛

what are the rules of a haiku? something about a limited number of syllables?