Poll: Please Vote and tell me which Flash animation is your favorite

kantonburg

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In revision 2 the letters come in AFTER the line thing
In revision 3 they come in at the same time
 

DAM

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kanto: here are my suggestions.


the image with the waves, is there a way you can get that in a vector image, it has many jagged edges and makes it look very unproffesional.

the second revision, you played too much too long with the lines around the name, show the name and then play with the lines all you want.

i would make the name of the company come in fast and strong, perhaps make it a little bigger or stand out some more.





dam()
 

kantonburg

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Thanks DAM I'll look into that. I really didn't notice till you mentioned it. That red is getting to my eyes... ;)
 

amnesiac

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I'll side with DAM. Make the name more prominent (pop it in first and keep it there) and clean up those waves.
 

kantonburg

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I'll have to remake the .gif (waves) They were sent to me. Someone else made it beforehand.
 

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