Fixed, thanksOriginally posted by: DuffmanOhYeah
Really, you live in Indiana Pennsylvania? Well, which is it? Indiana or Pennsylvania? You clearly intended to list two states as you are missing a comma to deliniate one as a city and the other as a state.
Executive Chair was the actual job title, there is nothing i can do about that.Originally posted by: Passions
Why is the website address so large and spaced? Make it normal.
Get rid of Executive Chair title. Makes you sound too presumpous, not really important for a entry level help desk job. Should dumb it down.
Other than that, looks good!!!
i agree with these, especially 2.Originally posted by: dullard
1) I'd remove personal info for your own safety when posting.
2) I don't think activities have a role in a typical resume.
3) Spacing is screwy, but htat is probably the Word translation to html.
4) It is a cliche to say references are available. Of course they are available - you wouldn't be hired if they aren't.