no sacrifice

[JacobJ]

pessimism. rotting corpse.
dark drawn cheeks stretched
below the jaw. femur strewn
on blood soaked hair. collapsed
dream of being whole. broken banner
of me. thumbs tossed. knees bent
wrong. no lips like honeyed wine

purr to you. don?t lift these
funny bones. don?t make them
your bread, your
sweet unleavened flesh
moist with forgiveness.

 

[ajpa123]

freak
:thumbsup:

 

[djheater]

Originally posted by: JacobJ
pessimism. rotting corpse.
dark drawn cheeks stretched
below the jaw. femur strewn
on blood soaked hair. collapsed
dream of being whole. broken banner
of me. thumbs tossed. knees bent
wrong. no lips like honeyed wine

purr to you. don?t lift these
funny bones. don?t make them
your bread, your
sweet unleavened flesh
moist with forgiveness.

Thanks.

That was fvcking terrible, which makes me feel much better about myself. Now I can say, "At least I don't post fvcking terrible poetry on the internet", and I appreciate that.

 

[zoiks]

Bored as hell and I wanna get ill
So I go to a place where my homeboyz chill
The fellas out there try to make that dollar
I pulled up in the 6-4 impala
greeted with a 40 and I start drinkin'
And from the 8-ball my breath start stinkin'
I gotta get my girl to rock that body
Before I left I hit the bacardi
Pulled to the house get her out of the pad
And the bitch said something to make me mad
She said somethin' that I couldn't believe
So I grabbed the stupid bitch by her nappy ass weave
She started talkin' sh*t, would'nt you know?
I reached back like a pimp and I slapped the ho'
And her father stood up and he started to shout
So I threw a right-cross and knocked his old ass out

Cuz the boyz in the hood are alwayz hard
Come talkin' that trash and we'll pull your card
Knowin' nothin' in life but to be legit'
Don't quote me boy, I ain't said sh*t ...