I need to write a story for kids about a dog. Its gonna be about 6 or 7 pages and 2 senteces per page. Then i will translate it to spanish, since this is for my spanish 2 class. The name i choose was skip, thus My dog Skip. Well i need an idea for a storyline, i have to talk about 4 things he did in a day, please help me think.
Need a story for a childrens book about a dog! common help out guys!
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I never used to pay much attention when my friends would talk about their dogs having parasites, never really applied to me or my dog, Skip. But one day that all changed, when I woke up to the strange image of my dog dragging his arse around on the carpet...
Azraele
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Hmm 6 to 10 is a wide gap. Six yr. olds are barely out of kindergarten and by the time you're 10 you're reading quite a bit more advanced than you did at 6. Why not make a story about how Skip escapes from his pen in the back yard and goes on an adventure in some Spanish city. Make sure he gets home in the end though 
Another idea would be to have Skip going through the frustrations of learning the basic command "sit." Describe what he feels when he's not sure what his owner wants and how happy he is when he does learn it.
If neither of these appeal, let me know in what direction you want the story to head and i'll shoot out some more ideas.
Another idea would be to have Skip going through the frustrations of learning the basic command "sit." Describe what he feels when he's not sure what his owner wants and how happy he is when he does learn it.
If neither of these appeal, let me know in what direction you want the story to head and i'll shoot out some more ideas.
>>>>>>>>WARNING: COPYING THIS STORY WILL GET YOU IN SERIOUS TROUBLE<<<<<
EDIT: PM me if you want it translated
MY PERRO SKIP
PAGE 1: Un dia mi perro skip se escapo de la casa y decidio explorar la ciudad.
PAGE 2: Paso por la casa de la perrita Lulu y la invito a pasear con el, pero ella no quiso, y se puso a ladrar. Skip se alejo muy enfadado. "Perra!" penso Skip.
PAGE 3: Skip paso por una area de construccion y decidio que el pie de uno de los trabajadores era un excelente lugar para marcar su territorio.
PAGE 4: Pobre Skip! El trabajador le dio una patada muy fuerte!
Skip huyo chillando. Que humillante!
PAGE 5: Skip decide cruzar la calle. Pero hay mucho trafico. NO, SKIP! NO LO HAGAS! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY
PAGE 6: Mi nuevo perro "Tortilla" no sale de la casa mucho. Creo que el aprendio su leccion y no volvera a escaparse.
FIN
Seriously though all joking aside; maybe you could think of a story line about your dog's day out--he runs away from home and you can insert any number of adventures and misadventures that he encounters.
Yes, it's been done but you know. I can't think of anything else.
Good luck with your story and for Heaven's sake don't copy the one I just wrote! The teacher would flunk you for sure! :Q
EDIT: PM me if you want it translated
MY PERRO SKIP
PAGE 1: Un dia mi perro skip se escapo de la casa y decidio explorar la ciudad.
PAGE 2: Paso por la casa de la perrita Lulu y la invito a pasear con el, pero ella no quiso, y se puso a ladrar. Skip se alejo muy enfadado. "Perra!" penso Skip.
PAGE 3: Skip paso por una area de construccion y decidio que el pie de uno de los trabajadores era un excelente lugar para marcar su territorio.
PAGE 4: Pobre Skip! El trabajador le dio una patada muy fuerte!
Skip huyo chillando. Que humillante!
PAGE 5: Skip decide cruzar la calle. Pero hay mucho trafico. NO, SKIP! NO LO HAGAS! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY
PAGE 6: Mi nuevo perro "Tortilla" no sale de la casa mucho. Creo que el aprendio su leccion y no volvera a escaparse.
FINSeriously though all joking aside; maybe you could think of a story line about your dog's day out--he runs away from home and you can insert any number of adventures and misadventures that he encounters.
Yes, it's been done but you know. I can't think of anything else.
Good luck with your story and for Heaven's sake don't copy the one I just wrote! The teacher would flunk you for sure! :Q
Azraele, thanks for the good idea about him escaping got any ideas on what he does? and how would i say the door was open, then he went outside in spanish lol.
La puerta fue ?. Skip pasó en la puerta ??
La puerta fue ?. Skip pasó en la puerta ??
one day my dog I run away from skip of the house and decidio to explore the city.
I pass for the house of the puppy Lulu and I invite her to take a walk the, but she did not want to, and it went down to bark. I drive away Skip very angry. .
Skip goes to construccion area and decide that the foot of one of the workpeople was an excellent place to mark his territory.
poor Skip! the laborer gave him a kick very strong!
Skip I flee shrieking . that humiliating!
Skip makes a decision to cross the street. but hay very much I traffic . no, SKIP! not do it AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY
I pass for the house of the puppy Lulu and I invite her to take a walk the, but she did not want to, and it went down to bark. I drive away Skip very angry. .
Skip goes to construccion area and decide that the foot of one of the workpeople was an excellent place to mark his territory.
poor Skip! the laborer gave him a kick very strong!
Skip I flee shrieking . that humiliating!
Skip makes a decision to cross the street. but hay very much I traffic . no, SKIP! not do it AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY
Azraele
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chiwawa626: maybe Skip is on a rope and the knot comes undone???? I'm not a Spanish connisuer, perhaps Elita can help with that part? After he gets loose, he wanders off to say a downtown meatmarket and gets a few scraps from the butcher. Then he couls see a cat (the first one he's ever encountered) in an alley and goes running away with the thing hisses at him. Tired from running, he could come to a boy crying and lick his face until the boy's mother comes to get him. Finally he gets thirsty and wants to play with his big red ball so he finds his way back home safely.
Or you could set the big escape during a big spanish festival (dia de los meurtes (sp?) ..or is that mexican?) and describe all the decoration and sights that he sees. He could also snatch a plate of spanish food and you'd describe how he likes it.
Or you could set the big escape during a big spanish festival (dia de los meurtes (sp?) ..or is that mexican?) and describe all the decoration and sights that he sees. He could also snatch a plate of spanish food and you'd describe how he likes it.
Translation of My previous post story:
MY DOG SKIP
page1: one day my dog skip escaped from the house and decided to explore the city.
page2: He passed by little dog Lulu's house and asked her to join him but she refused and started barking. Skip went away, angered. "Bitch", thought Skip.
Page 3: Skip passed by an area of construction and decided that the foot of one of the workers was an excelent place to mark his territory.
page 4: Poor Skip! The worker kicked him very hard! Skip ran away yelping. How humiliating!
page 5: Skip decides to cross the street, but there is a lot of traffic. NO, SKIP! DON'T DO IT!!! AYYYYYYYYYYYY
page 6: My new dog "tortilla" doesn't leave the house much. I think he learned his lesson and won't escape again.
The END
There you go, azraele!
MY DOG SKIP
page1: one day my dog skip escaped from the house and decided to explore the city.
page2: He passed by little dog Lulu's house and asked her to join him but she refused and started barking. Skip went away, angered. "Bitch", thought Skip.
Page 3: Skip passed by an area of construction and decided that the foot of one of the workers was an excelent place to mark his territory.
page 4: Poor Skip! The worker kicked him very hard! Skip ran away yelping. How humiliating!
page 5: Skip decides to cross the street, but there is a lot of traffic. NO, SKIP! DON'T DO IT!!! AYYYYYYYYYYYY
page 6: My new dog "tortilla" doesn't leave the house much. I think he learned his lesson and won't escape again.
The END
There you go, azraele!
heh thanks guys i think i can take it from here, my bro is home and i thin khe did upto spanish 4. Thanks for ur help, ill be sure to ask for some more help if i need it!
would this work:
Ayer skip tenío una aventura grande. ésta es un cuento de que hizo skip ayer.
Ayer skip tenío una aventura grande. ésta es un cuento de que hizo skip ayer.
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