My first web page.....

[Jeffwo]

My first web page.....at least the first one that I did totally from scratch.

What do you guys think?

Be gentle. now!


Oh, yeah, it's called LOCATOR (see my signature)


Thanks
Jeff

 

[dionx]

thats not what u do for a living is it? and if it is, how can someone take you seriously if you're running this off a geocities site. other than that, the site looks simple and clean. not bad.

 

[Mo0o]

no offense but your site has scam written all over it. maybe you shoudl make it look more credible. and i can find used cars too, its call autotrader.com

 

[oLLie]

He said pretty clearly it's his FIRST website so I don't think he's doing it as a pro just yet.

Anyone have any constructive criticism? I would but I'm not a web designer...

Damn, two craps on this guy's first effort already... even after he explicitly says:


<< What do you guys think?
Be gentle. now! >>



I suppose you two above me did a perfect job on your first website?

 

[Mo0o]

he needs a domain name. he needs to NOT use a generator and use html. and there should be more content. a single page of him claiming to be the real thing is NOT very credible. thats as constructive as i can make it.

 

[Jeffwo]

No, this isn't how I make my living. I actually run a body repair shop
but I am in contact with alot of folks, both buying and selling.

Hey, I wasn't asking anyone to rate the business. I was just proud of
my accomplishment with the page.

Yee Haa
Jeff

 

[hollowman]

GOOD JOB

 

[Jeffwo]

Wheww......tough crowd.

 

[teriba]

My advice:
Get a domain gotoecom ($10/year w/hosting)
You are going to need some more information, I would not feel safe giving you $100 based on this. You should write more and try to hide the price a little. Make people want the service first and then reveal the price. Explain why you have contacts, where the contacts are, why it's worth $100, etc.

What do you think?

 

[Jeffwo]

Yea, I can handle some constructive criticism now.

Teriba, I think you're right man.

 

[AdamDuritz99]

Dude, for your first website, i think you did a good job. My first website had frames for heaven sakes(used in some of the worst possible ways too). You have a clean nice layout. So be proud. I'll agree, this is not a website i would use for actual biz, but you're learning. Great job!

peace
sean

 

[Ns1]

That's a geocities template.


It looks nice I suppose as long as other people don't know it's a geocities template.