[Music] about this song i wrote.

[supersloth]

I've let you guys listen to my stuff in the past and you've given me some great feedback. here's a new track i'm working on. its still pretty rough but i'd like to know what everyone thinks. YEAH!

http://www.davidvossel.com/DAV...n_Wide_Rough_Test2.mp3

~ss

 

[Kirby]

Don't particularly care for the cymbal in the chorus, but once again you amaze me with your talent. :thumbsup:

Hurry up and get another album done so I can buy it.

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: nkgreen
Don't particularly care for the cymbal in the chorus, but once again you amaze me with your talent. :thumbsup:

Hurry up and get another album done so I can buy it.

yea, i know what you mean about the cymbals. i'm probably going to redo them in the entire song. i don't really own any good cymbols, they're all cracked ones my friends have given me.

 

[supersloth]

bump for more feedback.

 

[darkxshade]

Needs more cowbell

 

[KeithTalent]

Well I listened to it about 15 minutes ago and I just started singing it to myself, so I guess that means I like it. I thought the vocals could have been a little stronger, they sounded a little wispy in parts.

KT

 

[supersloth]

Originally posted by: KeithTalent
Well I listened to it about 15 minutes ago and I just started singing it to myself, so I guess that means I like it. I thought the vocals could have been a little stronger, they sounded a little wispy in parts.

KT

awesome!!