mail to new manager

[rookie1010]

Hey i am about to start a job and need to send an email to my new manager. what do you think of this mail.



Dear Pablo

I am starting on Thursday and HR informs me that i should contact you this week to get instructions on what to do on my arrival.

Do you have any specific instructions for me. Is there a good time to call you or can you mail me any instructions.

Best Regards
Juan

 

[jimbob200521]

😕

 

[Cuda1447]

post of the year

 

[rookie1010]

i just added some text, i had accidentally submitted the mail

 

[z0mb13]

Thats not really necessary. Just show up on ur first day.

 

[mzkhadir]

your manager will be happy if you show up 10 minutes earlier.

 

[Glavinsolo]

Originally posted by: rookie1010
i just added some text, i had accidentally submitted the mail

Well then its as good as its going to get.

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[S Freud]

when you ask a question its generally a good idea to use question marks...😛

 

[dullard]

1) Fix grammar mistakes (mostly punctuation).
2) In the first contact with your new boss, should you be more formal than that?

 

[lokiju]

Might want to practice capitalizing your I's.