Kalmah
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- Oct 2, 2003
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Nicely done. To me, it feels a bit overwhelmed though.
In my opinion, it needs a warmer feel to it. Having all of these things that appear to be offered to me right in my face on the front page gives me the same feeling as when talking to a salesperson at a car dealership... cold, heartless, money grabbing...
The page needs its own personality, one that I can identify with a name. I wouldn't feel comfortable ordering from it because of this. It reminds me of the for sale ads in a newspaper. Just there to get your money.
By 'identify with a name' I'm talking about a unique logo that matches a unique style of the page. If I saw that page one day, then saw it again a week later I wouldn't remember that I had seen it before.
It doesn't get my trust. The personality of the website is straight up 'we have stuff for sale, buy it' which makes me expect those who run the business to have the same bleak attitude.
Just my humble opinion.
In my opinion, it needs a warmer feel to it. Having all of these things that appear to be offered to me right in my face on the front page gives me the same feeling as when talking to a salesperson at a car dealership... cold, heartless, money grabbing...
The page needs its own personality, one that I can identify with a name. I wouldn't feel comfortable ordering from it because of this. It reminds me of the for sale ads in a newspaper. Just there to get your money.
By 'identify with a name' I'm talking about a unique logo that matches a unique style of the page. If I saw that page one day, then saw it again a week later I wouldn't remember that I had seen it before.
It doesn't get my trust. The personality of the website is straight up 'we have stuff for sale, buy it' which makes me expect those who run the business to have the same bleak attitude.
Just my humble opinion.
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