Lol paper #2

Trevelyan

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Dec 10, 2000
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Heh, Ok i just found another paper from my friend... turned in this year:


"GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOALs"

In the beginning of the semester we listed some of our weak points in the field of writing. I?m not sure but I believe that as a lower order concern I probably put spelling and my higher order concern I can?t really remember. That?s no problem though since I have a variety of weak points to choose from. So let?s just say it was getting started. I believe that I have made significant progress in both areas.

I guess that means it time to come up with two new problems with my writing. As my new higher order concern I think ill go with working on conclusions. That way ill have a good introduction and a matching conclusion. Maybe if I start good and end good, people will forget about all the crap in the middle.

As a lower order concern I really need to work on choppiness. My ideas come so fast, I forget things before I get a chance to write them down. Ill work on that ,though, by having many drafts and using writing tools like venn diagrams more often. Those problems will soon be solved and then Ill have millions of more problems to work on. So I guess that?s how Ill be spending my summer vacation.

-Bob Name-change