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[thirtythree]

one moment please.

edit: I don't know, looks fine to me. it sort of just cut off at the end though.

 

[Crusty]

I think the pans need to be smoother, but other then that it looks pretty good.

Of course, I have NO idea what a good quality demo reel would look like...but that looks good to me.

 

[slackerinabox]

Originally posted by: thirtythree
one moment please.

edit: I don't know, looks fine to me. it sort of just cut off at the end though.

hmm.. should I add another title card in the end? Or something? like "All footage (c) me"

 

[thirtythree]

Originally posted by: freedomsbeat212

Originally posted by: thirtythree
one moment please.

edit: I don't know, looks fine to me. it sort of just cut off at the end though.

hmm.. should I add another title card in the end? Or something? like "All footage (c) me"

making the sound fade out would help...

 

[slackerinabox]

Originally posted by: thirtythree

Originally posted by: freedomsbeat212

Originally posted by: thirtythree
one moment please.

edit: I don't know, looks fine to me. it sort of just cut off at the end though.

hmm.. should I add another title card in the end? Or something? like "All footage (c) me"

making the sound fade out would help...

hah.. good call.. Thanks man, sometimes common sense isn't so common at 2:30 AM

 

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