Like to read my poem?

Jugernot

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Heh, It was originally written in a daze after being up for 40 hours straight, so some parts might not make much sense. I found it on my hard drive and I figure since It says I wrote it last night, I did? Anyway, you be the judge, computer techie or poet?

Well anyway, if you appreciate good poetry, DON'T READ THIS!:

I am Techie hear me roar!
I am destined to be a hardware whore.
My life is such a dream with many other things.
I am Techie Hear me roar, my computer makes me hit the floor.
I don't know what can be done for the broken drive cage drawer.
My fans are blairring away, like a comet in the day.
I flip on the tv, only to see big belly of a guy who says hes a Techie.
My mind goes away, with the dogs and cats everyday.
My lyrics are bland with their feet stuck in the sand.
I am Techie hear me roar.
I am destined to be a hardware whore.
My OS hasn't been reinstalled in as long as it takes to walk my dog!
These things take time like a good email, but could run over like a bad ccmail.
The concept is rather boring like a can of chicken noodle, but the taste is much more like being frugal.
I must end this song, so I can stop and sing along.
So I must say good bye, with a twinkle.
Bye bye now like a silicon tear drop in my eye.

btw: As I'm reading it also seems like it could have been the lyrics to that one song "I am Woman hear me roar" by a woman in the 70s (Carly Simon?).
 

Azraele

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It is interesting, especially the concept (albeit a bit crude) of a "hardware whore"
 

DarK SagE

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COuld make a pretty good hard rock song. U have to yell out the whoar! or roar or whateer at the end of every line and add some lowd riffs!!