Land of the Lions - Lion in the Wind - Chapter 1 now posted!

[LordRaiden]

Well, since so many of you wanted to read all of my sci-fi writings and were curious of my stories, I thought I'd just start posting them for ya. I'll probubly never get published, so I figure that the best thing for these books is to share them with all of my friends on the internet.

My Writings

Bookmark that page and come back to it often. I'll be posting a new Chapter every Monday, Wendsday and Friday until I run out of stories.

Read, critique, enjoy. Feel free to share them with your friends too and tell me what you think of them.

 

[jagr10]

Whoa? Which idiot asked to read your stories?

 

[UnatcoAgent]

:S

 

[LordRaiden]

Huh, I knew you guys would start trolling sooner or later.

 

[WinkOsmosis]

Your grammar is lacking.

 

[Gyrene]

Eh, it's ok. You sure you wrote that, though?

 

[Zim Hosein]

Originally posted by: LordRaiden
Huh, I knew you guys would start trolling sooner or later.

 

[conjur]

Dazed and confused after 1 paragraph.

Oh...and white text on a black background?? ICK!

 

[Zim Hosein]

Originally posted by: conjur
Dazed and confused after 1 paragraph.

Oh...and white text on a black background?? ICK!

MIS loves that template conjur

 

[conjur]

Originally posted by: Zim Hosein

Originally posted by: conjur
Dazed and confused after 1 paragraph.

Oh...and white text on a black background?? ICK!

MIS loves that template conjur

I can see why he was in tears at his going away party!

 

[LordRaiden]

Originally posted by: WinkOsmosis
Your grammar is lacking.

I never said I was Stephen King either.

Besides, it's an early work written a long time ago and has since then collected dust.

So I'm airing them out and sharing them.

 

[LordRaiden]

So, anyone else read chapter 1 yet?

 

[Hubris]

I tried.

 

[cliftonite]

Im pretty sure my brain just hemorrhaged.

 

[LordRaiden]

Hemorrhaged?? From what?

 

[Stratum9]

There are problems: about five spelling errors and several grammar and punctuation. But at over 3,700 words that?s a lot less than is seen in most of the creative writing efforts posted here on ATOT. It?s obvious some effort went into this.

It?s not my genre so I?ll refrain from commenting on story content. But I am curious, however, why you so easily admit to your belief that you?ll never get published? Are you sure you?re not selling yourself short? Or was that dream never very strong to begin with? Us writers can be overly hard on ourselves at times.

 

[LordRaiden]

Augh! Spell check has failed me again!! Ok, fixed the spelling issues. Where's the gramatical ones? I really do apreciate the feedback. I may only do this as a hobby, but I always enjoy input into my work.

 

[nativesunshine]

When I was little i used to write stories about a lion named Leo. It was a children's story and I had many different series. But...i think my computer crashed one day and i lost it all. So devastating...for a 6th or 7th grader. Leo was awesome!

 

[LordRaiden]

Wow, sounds like Leo would have been an interesting series.

I find writing relaxing. I can dive into another world, become the charecters I'm writing about, grow with the story, and still challenge my mind with the complexities and difficulties required to produce a good story. I'm no professional, but I do take pride in what I do.

 

[dartworth]

Originally posted by: jagr10
Whoa? Which idiot asked to read your stories?

LMAO