I think your work looks great, and your site displays it nicely. It's easy to navigate and the artwork is clearly visible. I know I've helped to interview graphics people with much less talent and much worse portfolios. I can think of one place I was working where you'd almost have been guaranteed a job with that portfolio (not sure if it's the same type of job you're looknig for exactly, but you could have gotten it)
The only thing I would change is remove references to high schools, like this line: "3D animation was a major part of my high school career, and it is a hobby that I pursue today." It just makes you sould less professional.