IT Resume critique..help me out

[LostHiWay]

I'm in the job market again...need some feedback on my resume.

Link to resume

 

[GtPrOjEcTX]

not found.

edit: found.

 

[LostHiWay]

fixed

 

[GtPrOjEcTX]

are you unemployed? if so, need to change the current job date of employement away from "present"

other than that, you sound just like me. but a bit older.

 

[LostHiWay]

Originally posted by: GtPrOjEcTX
are you unemployed? if so, need to change the current job date of employement away from "present"

Not yet...They're just eliminating my position in a few months.

Probably not much older...24 here. I just worked full time through college (since I had to foot the bill)

 

[PunDogg]

not bad, but do u really need an objective, i put that in my cover letter. But thats just me

Dogg

 

[GtPrOjEcTX]

Originally posted by: LostHiWay

Originally posted by: GtPrOjEcTX
are you unemployed? if so, need to change the current job date of employement away from "present"

Not yet...They're just eliminating my position in a few months.

Probably not much older...24 here. I just worked full time through college (since I had to foot the bill)

22 here.

 

[lobadobadingdong]

I like the one page layout, the thought dividers are nice, I would put this in my to look at again stack if I were hiring for that position.

 

[LuckyTaxi]

So whos taking over?

 

[LostHiWay]

Originally posted by: lilcam
So whos taking over?

They're merging the network and system admin positions. The network admin has been with the company longer...so I'm out, unless I want to go back to help desk

 

[LuckyTaxi]

Originally posted by: LostHiWay

Originally posted by: lilcam
So whos taking over?

They're merging the network and system admin positions. The network admin has been with the company longer...so I'm out, unless I want to go back to help desk

Wow ... that sucks ... market looks pretty bad, is the IT market in Akron hot?

 

[LostHiWay]

Originally posted by: lilcam

Originally posted by: LostHiWay

Originally posted by: lilcam
So whos taking over?

They're merging the network and system admin positions. The network admin has been with the company longer...so I'm out, unless I want to go back to help desk

Wow ... that sucks ... market looks pretty bad, is the IT market in Akron hot?

Just about as freezing as it gets. I'll probably have to go up to Cleveland which is about an hour away.

 

[her209]

I'll send you an email as well as give you a call at home and on your cell phone and come over to your house to tell you what I think.

 

[LuckyTaxi]

Originally posted by: her209
I'll send you an email as well as give you a call at home and on your cell phone and come over to your house to tell you what I think.

?

 

[Mnementh]

Originally posted by: lilcam

Originally posted by: her209
I'll send you an email as well as give you a call at home and on your cell phone and come over to your house to tell you what I think.

?

In other words you should have edited those details out before posting the link on a public forum, you never know who's gonna look at it.

Mnementh

 

[LostHiWay]

Originally posted by: Mnementh

Originally posted by: lilcam

Originally posted by: her209
I'll send you an email as well as give you a call at home and on your cell phone and come over to your house to tell you what I think.

?

In other words you should have edited those details out before posting the link on a public forum, you never know who's gonna look at it.

Mnementh

Who cares...Worst that could happen is I shoot someone breaking in my house, but hey someone reading the forums might like resume and offer me a $200k a year job. (I can dream!)

 

[kag]

I think is looks very good. I would only have one suggestion, but maybe it's not possible because it could span your resume on two pages... but I would indent the job titles and each bubble from your employer's company, juuuust a little bit so it's easier to see if you are listing a new job title for the same company or completely another company.

Edit: what font did you use? It looks damn good in .pdf

 

[LostHiWay]

Originally posted by: kag
I think is looks very good. I would only have one suggestion, but maybe it's not possible because it could span your resume on two pages... but I would indent the job titles and each bubble from your employer's company, juuuust a little bit so it's easier to see if you are listing a new job title for the same company or completely another company.

Edit: what font did you use? It looks damn good in .pdf

Thanks for the suggestions...the font I used was Book Antiqua