is it okay for a haiku to rhyme?

DaveSimmons

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My favorite "what is haiku" reference (Alexey Andreyev) says rhymes (can be) fine, just as the 5-7-5 "rule" is really a convention pushed by lazy teachers to simplify grading.
 

MrAwesome

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It is NOT okay to rhyme, as this will result in the loss of one testicle and 15 yrs in prison.
 

kevinthenerd

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Originally posted by: MrAwesome
It is NOT okay to rhyme, as this will result in the loss of one testicle and 15 yrs in prison.

Exactly. It's freakin' poetry, dude. If you restrict yourself, it isn't art.
 

thirtythree

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Originally posted by: kevinthenerd
Originally posted by: MrAwesome
It is NOT okay to rhyme, as this will result in the loss of one testicle and 15 yrs in prison.

Exactly. It's freakin' poetry, dude. If you restrict yourself, it isn't art.
I didn't say it was art. it's an assignment.
 

Rob9874

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The idea that a haiku has to follow a 5-7-5 rule negates it's artform. Why not a 3-8-3 haiku?
 

JBAR

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A Haiku to rhyme?
Results would take too much time.
It's not worth a dime.
 

kevinthenerd

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Originally posted by: Deslocke
Originally posted by: kevinthenerd
Originally posted by: MrAwesome
It is NOT okay to rhyme, as this will result in the loss of one testicle and 15 yrs in prison.

Exactly. It's freakin' poetry, dude. If you restrict yourself, it isn't art.
I didn't say it was art. it's an assignment.

God forbid we go beyond what's expected of us! God forbid we actually get something out of it, learning on our own, rather than jumping though other people's hoops!

Is this the state of today's formal education system? Are you scared to learn something that won't be tested?

Why CAN'T it be art, hrmm?
 

thirtythree

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Originally posted by: kevinthenerd
Originally posted by: Deslocke
Originally posted by: kevinthenerd
Originally posted by: MrAwesome
It is NOT okay to rhyme, as this will result in the loss of one testicle and 15 yrs in prison.

Exactly. It's freakin' poetry, dude. If you restrict yourself, it isn't art.
I didn't say it was art. it's an assignment.

God forbid we go beyond what's expected of us! God forbid we actually get something out of it, learning on our own, rather than jumping though other people's hoops!

Is this the state of today's formal education system? Are you scared to learn something that won't be tested?

Why CAN'T it be art, hrmm?
I actually write poetry on my own, but I've never been a big fan of haikus. that's horrible, I know, and it's all because of our faulty education system.