Originally posted by: Pale Rider
I?m no music critic but you asked so here goes.
The tempo is too slow, it was putting me to sleep. The shrill voice of the singer is trying to mimic the shrill voice of just about every other lead singer in any band the last 10 years. More of the same.
Too much "dead space" in-between the verses, if you can call them that. A long bass line (5-6 seconds) is not an appropriate transition into a new verse, I don't care how depressing they are trying to be. Maybe speed it up a little and shorten the play time a little. The song is 3:55 and could easily be 3:00.
Sorry if that's harsh. Ugh. No more. It sucked, badly.
Originally posted by: Pale Rider
I?m no music critic but you asked so here goes.
The tempo is too slow, it was putting me to sleep. The shrill voice of the singer is trying to mimic the shrill voice of just about every other lead singer in any band the last 10 years. More of the same.
Too much "dead space" in-between the verses, if you can call them that. A long bass line (5-6 seconds) is not an appropriate transition into a new verse, I don't care how depressing they are trying to be. Maybe speed it up a little and shorten the play time a little. The song is 3:55 and could easily be 3:00.
Sorry if that's harsh. Ugh. No more. It sucked, badly.