i need a sad love poem [=i told her how i felt=]

MainFramed

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one that will get her attention, and if it says something like im sorry, i love you, i wish i could have a second chance..............anyone got any good poems?:brokenheart::(

UPDATE: I told her how i felt, and she doesnt feel the same, shes in love with some other guy.......im kinda getting over her. heh im young and its ok i guess
 

VBboy

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"Said I loved you but I lied" by someone was pretty good :)
They even made a song out of it.
 

jcovercash

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LOL, Im in the sorta the same prediciment. I want to write one for my girlfriend telling her how much I love her..... I have 2 lines so far :p.....

But like the others said write one from the heart. If you really care for her It should come easy.... Remember good poetry doesnt nessicerally have to rhyme :)
 

xirtam

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Steal what you need. Don't really think about this stuff when I write it. So I don't know whether it's good crap or bad crap until I give it 24 hours without thinking about it. Then I pick it up and if I like it, I keep it, and if I don't like it, I scrap it. You might try that.

Golden sunlight streams
Through my window pane
Waking me from dreams
But my hopes for the day are quickly slain
The sky overcast
I stumble in the dark
Finishing this race last
Not a walk in the park
Looking for someone or something
Cannot see through the dreary mist
But I'll know when I find her -- she means everything
And she'll fix more problems than I can list
Because the clouds are my own
This overcast day I've blown
I just want to return to yesterday
When the smiling sun shone
I'm a blind man pleading desperately with you
Only you can remove these clouds from my eyes
My tears, you can take them from me too
They're from a dying heart, wants to once again beat true

Anyway, no, haven't done the BK thing yet. Haven't seen her since last week, and I'm not going to go to BK again for awhile... have to work through lunch every day this week. Maybe next week. Been aquiring more "friends who are girls" lately though, so the BK thing hasn't really been on my mind that much, although I wouldn't mind taking her to a movie or the zoo or something.
 

hdeck

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not a "poem" per say, but a great love song, nontheless:

"always" by bon jovi

this romeo is bleeding
but you can't see his blood
it's nothing but some feelings
that this old dog kicked up

it's been raining since you left me
now I'm drowning in the flood
you see I've always been a fighter
but without you I give up

now I can't sing a love song
like the way it's meant to be
well, I guess I'm not that good anymore
but baby, that's just me

yeah, I will love you
baby - Always
and I'll be there forever and a day -
Always
I'll be there till the stars don't shine
till the heavens burst and
the words don't rhyme
and I know when I die, you'll be on my mind
and I'll love you - Always

now you're pictures that you left behind
are just memories of a different life
some that made us laugh, some that made us cry
one that made you have to say goodbye
what I'd give to run my fingers through
your hair
to touch your lips, to hold you near
when you say your prayers
try to understand
I've made mistakes, I'm just a man

when he holds you close, when he pulls you near
when he says the words you've been
needing to hear
I'll wish I was him `cause those words are mine
to say to you till the end of time

yeah, I will love you
baby - Always
and I'll be there forever and a day -
Always
if you told me to cry for you
I could
if you told me to die for you
I would
take a look at my face
there's no price I won't pay
to say these words to you

well, there ain't no luck
in these loaded dice
but baby if you give me just one more try
we can pack up our old dreams
and our old lives
we'll find a place where the sun still shines

 

jcovercash

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I am in tears from missing you right now
Alone is how I feel without you near
To go on without you I know not How
For this pain in my heart is so severe
If only you would take me back to you
Please just give me a chance to show my love
We could forget the past and start anew
For I know we were destined from above
<Insert Name Here>, my love for you is so great
I look at you and relize that you are my soul mate.

Josh Overcash


May not be the best, But Maybe it will help you out some.. If you like it feel free to use it, you may claim it as your own also... Ill try to do anything to help a guy with the girl he loves :D
 
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Originally posted by: xirtam
M4H, I don't want to hear you dissing on my survey idea *ever* again.

Why? Did it work?
rolleye.gif


Sorry VBBoy ... you kinda got drowned in the floods of sappy drivel. :p Props to you for that one. :) Demon-Xanth too :D

- M4H
 

xirtam

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Originally posted by: MercenaryForHire
Originally posted by: xirtam
M4H, I don't want to hear you dissing on my survey idea *ever* again.

Why? Did it work?
rolleye.gif


Sorry VBBoy ... you kinda got drowned in the floods of sappy drivel. :p Props to you for that one. :) Demon-Xanth too :D

- M4H

I bet it's got a better chance than your poem, but if you want, I'll try both out and get back to you.
 

VBboy

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Girly girl, come make me happy,
Let's get naked really snappy,
Don't be hiding no sex,
Eww, you didn't shave them legs! :Q

(As soon as this one is absorbed and appreciated, I will write more)