I made a track a while ago. Opinions?

[Vindris]

I made this little beat a while ago and never got much feedback on it. Listen and tell me what you think.

 

[Mayne]

it does have that heart beat rthrym

 

[Mayne]

i like it a lot. I can't spell that rythm word. it must the world's hardest word to spell.

 

[Vindris]

i like it a lot. I can't spell that rythm word. it must the world's hardest word to spell.

It's rithm

 

[Mayne]

that looks right.

 

[brianmanahan]

i'll take this over naer's work

the sharp melody synth got on my nerves a little though, but not too bad

sweet videos

 

[Vindris]

Here's another track I finished a while back:

https://soundcloud.com/yaventrance/yaven-the-luminous-deep-original-mix