I feel bad for this person with his girl problem :(

[amdguy]

http://www.yagt.org/forums/index.php?showtopic=1676

life is like the candle flame in the wind
easily snuffed, easily extinguished

19 years of life passed alone, no one but darkness
what does the future has for me is a dark shroud hard to uncover.

life in a mess, i think no one will ever like me, i will never find that special girl, what can i do? the one i like are all taken, nothing left in this world for me

darkness.....

enlighten me

Empty-handed I entered the world
Barefoot I leave it.
My coming, my going --
Bitter winds of winter,
scour my heart every night in silence,
the pain, the suffering, mounting, unbearable
like a dew drop on the grass,
vanishing into bitterness


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he is defintely a good write thou

 

[Chunkee]

gag

 

[minendo]

You feel sorry for yourself?

 

[Anubis]

there is a whole site for this, why did you bring it here you broke the rule

 

[djheater]

If by good you mean plagiarist, then yes.

PS - Your grammar is terrible.

 

[amdguy]

whooops i am sorry,

please forgive as i am noobie

 

[Kalvin00]

Originally posted by: Chunkee
gag

:laugh:

 

[minendo]

Originally posted by: Anubis
there is a whole site for this, why did you bring it here you broke the rule

He wanted more people to see his poem.

 

[JulesMaximus]

Whaaaaa!!! Poor me!!!

Sounds like a typical whiny teenager...:roll:

 

[SuPrEIVIE]

maybe because he feels sorry and he wants others to be as well?

 

[xcript]

:thumbsdown:

 

[amdguy]

wtf...that guys simplied copied certain verses from different poems and fixed it together lol

thanks for the tip DJ!

 

[gigapet]

gay gay gay gay and more gay with a side of gay and some gay of the day.

 

[minendo]

Originally posted by: amdguy
wtf...that guys simplied copied certain verses from different poems and fixed it together lol

thanks for the tip DJ!

Replace guys with I.

 

[MacBaine]

Originally posted by: amdguy
wtf...that guys simplied copied certain verses from different poems and fixed it together lol

thanks for the tip DJ!

Dude, we already came to the conclusion that you are the same person. Lay off the pity trip.

 

[djheater]

It's almost insulting that a self-absorbed egocentric kid would take the death poetry of a Zen monk and apply it to their angst. No greater missing of the point is possible. Seriously. Un-fvcking-real.

 

[MacBaine]

Originally posted by: gigapet
gay gay gay gay and more gay with a side of gay and some gay of the day.

Ladies and Gentlemen let's give it up for the Anandtech Marching BAND!

 

[Modeps]

cheer up emo kid.

 

[amdguy]

actually, those were death poems by samurais, taken from this site:

http://www.salon.com/weekly/zen960805.html

and no, that person is not me and why would i do such things?
i only posted it here because the writing caught my eyes and want you pple to see it.

 

[PanzerIV]

Skywalker66 aka Gjeste is writin' poetry now...

 

[djheater]

Originally posted by: amdguy
actually, those were death poems by samurais, taken from this site:

http://www.salon.com/weekly/zen960805.html

and no, that person is not me and why would i do such things?
i only posted it here because the writing caught my eyes and want you pple to see it.

I don't believe that Kozan Ichikyo was a Samurai, I find him referenced as a Zen Teacher, which leads me to assume he was a monk.

 

[minendo]

Originally posted by: amdguy
and no, that person is not me and why would i do such things?

BS

 

[Anubis]

i like that last post in the thread

hehe

 

[djheater]

Originally posted by: Anubis
i like that last post in the thread

hehe

I must be bored, I joined YAGT, just to reply to that post.... I want some chocolate cake, I think I'm gonna stop at the bakery and buy a cake for me and the kids. They'll be surprised.