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UglyCasanova

UglyCasanova

Lifer
Mar 25, 2001
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NICE I THINK THIS ONE WORKS :D

Tried to make em look less whorish. I dunno, I'm done. The girls at the bottom look really good actually, but I blurred em out so I wouldn't get banned. :p

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Making a poster for somebody, originally 13 x 19 300 dpi. It looks like crap as a jpeg, and I still got a lot of work to do on it. I think I'm gonna put two lesbians having sex in bed down at the bottom. Anywho, how do they look so far?

Okay, see if this works:

Hopefully works

The red background was just something I threw in there, not gonna be part of the final pic.

edit: fvck, just tried it in IE (I'm on a mac though but still) and it still doesn't work. No clue why, works fine in Safari and apparently some people can open it.

edit 2: Well hell, I thought they looked pretty good. To redeem myself, I made this a while back:

Goat man

:D

OKAY It's ugly I know, but how about some constructive criticism. Always good to get someone else's perspective, so with what I got so far what things should I do (other than scrap it :p)?

o and this is probably the single most unorganized post I've ever made lol

edit 3something: And honestly, now that I look at it (the new version on the white background), I dunno wtf you guys are talking about. I like it. I mean it's two chics kissing, but it's not trashy and pornographic like some of you are making it out to be. And yea there are definitely areas that need word, but lets so what you can do beeyatch! :p:D
 
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bandana163

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Jul 2, 2003
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It works in Opera.
I guess the compression kills the details, it looks like an artistic painting.
 
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neonerd

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Apr 24, 2003
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Originally posted by: Mo0o
Looks good but the make up seems a little heavy.
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yup

for people who can't see the pic, go to last 25 and it's up there...you can't open it though because of the error in the image
 
UglyCasanova

UglyCasanova

Lifer
Mar 25, 2001
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Link works for me.

About the make up. Yeah, it seems heavy but a lot of the just, well crap, like above the eyes on the girl on the left just showed up when I made it a jpeg. Alot of the darks suddenly became a lot darker too. I dunno, jpeg sucks. Still, I got a lot of work to do. If anyone knows a good pic of 2 hot lesbians having sex you can send me give me a pm (no nudity though, or if there is make it TASTEFUL. ie no double ended dildo's etc).
 
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Pepsi90919

Lifer
Oct 9, 1999
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Originally posted by: neonerd
Originally posted by: Mo0o
Looks good but the make up seems a little heavy.
Click to expand...

yup

for people who can't see the pic, go to last 25 and it's up there...you can't open it though because of the error in the image
Click to expand...

99% of the population can properly link an image, you can too
 
UglyCasanova

UglyCasanova

Lifer
Mar 25, 2001
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Weird. Link works just fine for me (I'm using Safari). That thumbnail doesn't do it justice at all (makes everything real purple looking).
 
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b0mbrman

Lifer
Jun 1, 2001
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Originally posted by: Pepsi90919
Originally posted by: neonerd
Originally posted by: Mo0o
Looks good but the make up seems a little heavy.
Click to expand...

yup

for people who can't see the pic, go to last 25 and it's up there...you can't open it though because of the error in the image
Click to expand...

99% of the population can properly link an image, you can too
Click to expand...
No they can't...
 
Gooberlx2

Gooberlx2

Lifer
May 4, 2001
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I'm not a fan.

I'm not a fan of the red spotlighted and off-center background. The girls, while pretty, do look makeup heavy and there's something that doesn't sit well with me about how their heads just fizzle off and their hair looks much blurrier than the rest of their heads/faces.

Artistically, I also don't like it. To me it looks tackier than anything else....kinda like in poor taste. I think alot of it has to do with the tongue, open mouths, etc. which kinda crosses the bridge between artistic representation, and pornish image. I think there are much nicer ways of portraying woman-woman love. This just reminds me of some little scants vying for attention at a house party.

Not exactly constructive criticism, I know, but that's because there's isn't any one thing I would improve on this. I would scrap it.

That said, it would appear that you do have some skill with this sort of thing. Just work on your choice of composition and subject matter.
 
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SchrodingersDog

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I'm a big fan of lesbians, but this looks like a couple of cadavers got held up on the way to their wakes. The good news is if you do it in velvet you could sell it to most sleazy motels thirty years ago.
 
UglyCasanova

UglyCasanova

Lifer
Mar 25, 2001
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:(

I guess it's in poor taste maybe, but cmon It's a poster of lesbians kissing for a college chic. :p
 
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Looney

Lifer
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That has got to be one of the ugliest thing i've ever seen. You've turned what should be a beautiful act into something hideous.

Just get a black and white poster of the Tatu girls kissing... they're not the most attractive girls around, but that pic is HOT.
 
UglyCasanova

UglyCasanova

Lifer
Mar 25, 2001
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Originally posted by: Hardcore
That has got to be one of the ugliest thing i've ever seen. You've turned what should be a beautiful act into something hideous.

Just get a black and white poster of the Tatu girls kissing... they're not the most attractive girls around, but that pic is HOT.
Click to expand...

:(
 
nakedfrog

nakedfrog

No Lifer
Apr 3, 2001
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Have you thought about just grabbing a frame from a movie, then maybe applying some filters to it?
 
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